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Cezar=

1.This dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
^^That was weak as an opener...plus not a good punch,Really useless!

2.Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
^^^Again,WTF!?!...you cant rhyme glass with glass...and yet another played line from tha 90's.Bad choice!

3.You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
^^^Eh?...1st line is okay this time,2nd line is really useless...should've left that in diss cypher!

4.This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radio
^^^Now Im feelin like bliss just hopped on ta another computer an made an alias so he could get an eazy win.
REALLY cezar...Elevate ur game 4 real,cuz that was bad.

1/8..no h8 just being real.


Bliss=

1.dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem
^^^That's a nice opener..okay punch but good wordplay,multi's!

2.tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
^^^^That was an aiight punch,but still it connect'd.

3.this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla
^^^I think u used tha punch wrong,but it was okay...Eh?

4.took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig
^^^^^Nice personal,okay punch and aiight ending.


3/4

My vote is 4 Bliss,got it hands down.

Cezar......keep elevating.

Sorry,but I aint gotta enough post ta vote....Shit!
So its feed back an my breakdown!

Yo This Was A Hot Battle Both Had A Good Flow Both Had Nice Pers But Cezar Was Just To Got There4 He Gets Ma Vote

Voted For: blisss



dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem
^^^bah...weak and uncreative...but an attempt
tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
^^OK............
this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla
^^^NIce...........
took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig
^^DOPE

Ok.ya got the concepts and shit.So set up your punches better.I like how you didn't have the basic rhyme sheme.SOme of your punches could have hit harder with some better wording.

This dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
^^^NO...wat the fuck is this?
Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
^^How does he act gangsta?HUH?
You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
^^PLAyed as fuck in 1st line and whack
This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radio
^^NO......this bullshit

Dawg...wat the hell.Ya got structure.But you also have basic rhyme scheme.Ya punches suck.Had some played out basic shit.I seen elementary kids talk better trash that wat you spit.NO hate.

Vote-Bliss

Hit my battle with marv in sig....

And please.....don't hate vote

yay, one vote..........word...............................

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