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07-20-05, 07:36 PM
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IP: F519 0F67
Bumpin this thing another time ........cmon.......votes
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07-22-05, 06:37 PM
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The Martyr
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IP: F519 0F67
Bumpin this thing...maybe i can get some votes eh???
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07-23-05, 10:41 AM
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#18
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This was feedback posted for Paroxysm
IP: 6436 6DF8
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07-24-05, 07:17 PM
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The Martyr
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IP: F519 0F67
^thanks for nothing...anyways uppin this thing............
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07-25-05, 05:27 PM
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R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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IP: CDA8 A0B5
Voted For: Paroxysm
Damn........thats a lot of lines so i'm just gonna go for the basics... u had a very good opening with a sick closure............. the best punch: Cause im hoping we elope to change her name and her address So im face to face with stress, but the way she fits that dress weakest line: We stayed awake for hours talking how our future may be paved Then she fell asleep in my arms, we woke up the next day at 8........ very nice drop there:::::::: Vote:Paroxysm
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07-27-05, 11:28 AM
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The Martyr
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IP: F519 0F67
bumpin once again .....................................
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07-27-05, 11:50 AM
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This was feedback posted for Gongshow.
IP: 658B CB6E
that other guy shit too long....good luck trya get votes....
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08-01-05, 01:02 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 5E9A 158A
Voted For: Paroxysm
Wat a damn story hands down I dint even wanna read your opponent's say Hot shit mayne keep it up ........
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08-03-05, 12:24 PM
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The Martyr
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IP: F519 0F67
^---------------------------------------------------------^ for the win
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08-04-05, 10:27 AM
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The Martyr
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IP: F519 0F67
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08-05-05, 03:24 PM
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The Martyr
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IP: F519 0F67
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08-08-05, 10:17 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Paroxysm
Aii Paroxysm Aii Man Your Topical Was Very Very very Long For Starters But You Did Stay On Point And You Did State Your Topical Opinion Very Precise And You Had Very Nice Vocab And Imagery Mixed in Inside of This Topical and Then You Stayed On Topic Threw The Whole Thing Which Is kind Of Hard To Do if You Have a Long Drop Like Your Some People Jus Type Forever Lol But You Stayed on Point And You Dropped Some a Nice Point Of View of The Topic My Favorite Lines Were These Rii Here: Engaged with a hang over…I left bed yawning Took a piss and went down stairs for a fresh egg omelet Came back to ask jaine…”you want break-fast mommy” And I gasped cause it wasn’t her but her best friend bonnie LOl Your Like an RV R.Kelly lol Except You wasnt Trapped In The Closet lol Nice Stroyline man Good Drop You Get my vote in This Battle [size=5]Please RTf In mY battle Link ASAP [size] Gongshow ai man Your Piece was Shirt And Its Nuttin Wrong With keepin your drops simple Sometimes In These Topicals BUT....when you got a Topic as of what you guys had yous houldve came alot more coplex and a little more creative seems like you were crammin all your thoughts and Ideas in like 2 lines each and it didnt seem like you was really feelin what you was sayin and all so I wasnt feelin your drop that much man Im sorry to say ..............So You couldnt get my vote in ths batlle man srry no hate PLEASE RTf in my battle Link |
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