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07-13-05, 10:34 PM | #16 | |||||
GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
uppin............................................. .......
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07-14-05, 09:13 AM | #17 | |||||
GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
still uppin............................................. ....
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07-14-05, 11:11 AM | #18 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
IP: BE5E 5207
structure is bad Khaoz, but the lyrical content is aight
i guess now Narc see'z why when it came down to the wire, i chose khaoz....uppin for y'all two..
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07-14-05, 03:47 PM | #19 | ||||||
GeNeRaL
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i always new that khaoz was good but i know im better than some of the other people you kept but no hard fellings teph your still fam still uppin |
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07-14-05, 04:26 PM | #20 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 2680 6423
Voted For: NaRc-UzI
Dawg beatz on newbs, rec full ov ''smoking herbs'' lyke bob Marley N.U iz gangsta?...he aint never ''ridin'' lyke wheelchair patients on a Harley ha decent... yuh flowz cant harm-me, if u try ''droppin bombs''..i'll find a shelter bitch nigga..........ya raps iz stinkin!....even blind men aint ''felt-ya'' nah... nobody smelt-ya, ur rhymes iz slept on like a dirty matress u can call me director da way i ''take shots'' @ diz actor ok... i'll subtract-ya metahpours, brake 'em into two'z, u LOSE-G Got diz Narc wannabe woozy when i clap with the UZI aight... u need alot more than ur skill 2 move-me, I'm built lyke a lyrical rock u'd think diz lame rhymerz a BIRD....Cuz ov da way he always gettin ''Mocked'' 1st line weak should of word it better 2ed aight... i'm prepeared for WAR, Got da real fam behind me, Leave u SORE check ur profile..u love us so damn much, U STILL THINK UR REPPIN RAW! decent personal... Fuck diz i'ma go out Hardcore, while narc stayz catchin Nutz! C'mon dawg.. Why u mad 4?...It aint my fault u aint RAW Enuff 2 avoid da cutz! nah....weak lyrical slut, u step 2 any talent & ''back down'' quicker than Pole Dancers if u ever got signed.... .........u'd prolly blow it all, & buy ghost writers wit ur advances! aight ending.... not a bad verse preety average all around punches n all could of came a little more harder and more focus some bars was weak or just flowing insted of direct attack... 6.5/10 This bitch is not gifted if he was crack not even a crack whore would be addicted Lets be serious he has a lesser chance of beating me than a landlord getting evicted ha nice preety creative... Khaoz must be an Armless father cause he could never really seem to hold His Own In his profile it says that Living Legends are his crew but he says that RAW is his home aight personal... Homie im able to bring alot to the table while spitting fire like an erupting volcano Khaoz is not a smart ass cuz he give alot of brain but he also demands alot of anul aight... Batteling me whats the purpose the only way youll win is if god switched the verses Your like a gothic person praying in churches cause like his prayers you are worthless preety decent... You dont have to fear me but when i come to RAWs forum and chat you better take it EASY I would smack your ass if u come near me cause you bringing KHAOZ homie is just a THEROY aight ending... i thought this was a better verse and more focus a little more creative not by much, i just thought hes verse hit harder good battle ya'll..... 7.5 |
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07-14-05, 04:53 PM | #21 | ||||
Flyweight
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This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
IP: 8BB8 A803
I likes this son it's real tight I give it a 8/10.
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07-14-05, 06:36 PM | #22 | |||||||
==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: ECB3 36A0
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07-14-05, 07:21 PM | #23 | |||||
GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
uppin............................................. ..............
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07-14-05, 10:22 PM | #24 | |||||
GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
still uppin............................................. .....
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07-14-05, 10:46 PM | #25 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 72AA 464B
Voted For: NaRc-UzI
Good flow an rhyming..... fav line Homie im able to bring alot to the table while spitting fire like an erupting volcano Khaoz is not a smart ass cuz he give alot of brain but he also demands alot of anul Batteling me whats the purpose the only way youll win is if god switched the verses Your like a gothic person praying in churches cause like his prayers you are worthless I was feeling your rhymes more.. It was also easier to read.. keep reppin b Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-15-05, 12:48 AM | #26 | |||||||
ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
IP: EF25 E8E6
checkin polls... werd.... hmmmmm... no comments yet...lol
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07-15-05, 01:48 AM | #27 | ||||||
CHRYMESINDICATE
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IP: 0E6C 3AED
Voted For: NaRc-UzI
Very close battle. here.... pretty hard to decide but i'm going with this...... Narc uzi....... you had a better rhyme scheme, your rhyming words were more complex.... keep that up! Khaoz theory....... you need to start spitting in a more "professional style" look how people like L.I. and R-Rater and nostradamus spit....... It's perfect gramma and they never swear..... Saying stuff like "bitch nigga..." It has nothing to do with the actual rap it just fills in space........ Etc.... vote goes to NaRc-UzI
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07-15-05, 01:51 AM | #28 | |||||
GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
aight thanks for voting im up 3-1 still uppin......................
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07-15-05, 01:54 AM | #29 | ||||||
CHRYMESINDICATE
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IP: 0E6C 3AED
aye drop a vote on the 4fil verse (x)eed battle ok...... need to get that closed quick.. thx
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07-15-05, 09:40 AM | #30 | |||||
GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
2-1 still uppin........................................
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