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The Ranks are increasing soo is the boys style for "gamin"
STRIKE 3, your OUT...... and close the door you came in
hes actin like Houdini was his uncle and they were related
i'll pull this "Rabbit" out my ass,& he still be "truthfully naked'

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When this wack flows its coincidental//
10 year olds flowed betta with outa beat of instrumentals//
^^^whack as fuq....get complex
wit more losses then wins, Claimin he got hip-hop fundamentalz//
your 13th loss is what im bout to *sent*ence*you//
^^wtf?....you think that bullshit's wordplay?
He calls me out thinkin he got this E.Z.//
but your mom told me different,when she was Plea*sin me//
^^^why separate plea*sin?Not changin anything
Why you think you can rap cause oyu talk that fake Gangsta shit//
You the b the only one leaving a battle with a split lip//
^^Not a punch
Face it g, its over for you....thts it //
So grab ya pen an paper, Cause this aint da last time your bein schooled kid//
^^^stop!!!!!Just diss him....
So if ya plan was ta beat me an smoke some weed // Well ill have to disagree cuz i came to show you up now my goal was xeed'ed
^^^shut up....

Newb structure.Weak punches.Embarrasing attempt at wordplay.No flow.Change everything.Go grab a pen&a pad and practice.Find a whole new style because this one is not gonna win you shit.Some of your lines didn;t make sence.And don't glorify urself or talk about killin him.Just trow punches.

Got his name mixed up, should have been called MC Mistake
His mum lost him before he was even born and Misplaced
^^1st line was good....2nd was too basic
"mystique" me to wat, lookin threw the crystal ball for future
A.F.V's ...............ooops his lyrics won it for the "blooper"
^^^NO....wordplay or metas....
The boy loves rap now how can we get this child to win?
use your "magic" on this battle and use it for your next loss in
^^^NO......
The Ranks are increasing soo is the boys style for "gamin"
STRIKE 3, your OUT...... and close the door you came in
^^Not a punch.....
hes actin like Houdini was his uncle and they were related
i'll pull this "Rabbit" out my ass,& he still be "truthfully naked'
^^umm.....Ok...I guess
the dullest in the lot, been known as the ugly duckling
His Wings have Clipped, & his ver-ses, are quite "revolting"
^^decent......
You be crazy and still wont get no Insane Label
time to murder this baby and put him to his Cradle
^^^Not a punch
The bitch be pullin..............wackness straight outta his cap
his rhymes wouldnt be "pimped" even if Xzibit helped this Kat
^^^Ur best line....though not all that

Well....you won easily....cause you battlin a newb who's culeless and doesn't know at a punch is.Next time...try to add some wordplay or metas.Make your rhymes more complex.U gotta be indirect when sayin shit.Like..instead a sayin...
"eat box a fruit loops"...say.....
"eat cereal with parrot on cover'
Get wat im sayin?It hard to understand but if ya work at it...it'll come.Read tutorials.Get some word fission and shit.Try to jot in some multis to upp ya flow.....

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