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07-16-05, 09:56 PM
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in your e-dreams
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IP: FEFC E273
Voted For: lyrical mage
told hood to jack some people but dont get your shoes muddy but kid rather stay home and get cream from jackin his buddy vs. nothin this was a weak battle....but lyrical mage had like one decent punch therefore he wins...but seriously both need to get more creative and elevate...think more witty
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07-17-05, 12:36 PM
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#17
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Flyweight
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IP: 2DE1 C8CD
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07-17-05, 03:36 PM
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Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
Voted For: C-Hood
C-Hood Ok first of all.... don't seperate your bars, it ruins the flow. Second watch out for the self-glory. 3rd some of your bars were streatched.... those are the things to watch out for in the future. Ok your opener was pretty good, nice personal. Your closer was kinda stretched. Your other bars were pretty good, hard hitting and creative. Good personals in your verse too lyrical mage ok... same thing with you, don't seperate your bars, it ruins the flow to your verse. Now your opener was lackin a little bit and your closer was kinda self-glory, but funny as hell with that Andy Milinokis (i thought i was the only one who watched that show). Your other bars where alright but some were to short to make it a nice hard punch... work on tweakin your lines to make them harder hitting
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07-17-05, 03:39 PM
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Above Originality
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This was feedback posted for C-Hood
IP: D40E 67D5
shit homie u could elevate.........puches were weak........structure iffy but keep elevatiin homie!ayo battle me
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07-18-05, 07:14 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: A665 3164
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07-19-05, 09:37 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 129F 7EE3
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07-19-05, 10:10 AM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
Voted For: C-Hood
kinda of a weak battle here no offense but not alot of punches nad personals jsut self glory need to stop the self glory.......and kinda some wordplay by C but LM u coulda dont better seen better from u u got potential so keep elevatin but this battle ill give to C-hood cuz has betta flow to it and gots sum punches connectin but aint hittin hard so my v/ c-hood......keep elevatin yall.....1...... rtf on my battles in my sig or vote gets removed......
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07-19-05, 11:44 AM
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IP: CDA8 A0B5
Voted For: C-Hood
Lyrical Mage: You came out with loads of good rhyming skiils and verbal skills but didnt come out on top as C-Hood did.. C-Hood: Although you lost to One Mic, Overdose and Effect... i could truly see that you've elevated your game up a noch...... good opening and closure but bit weak with punches and multis... Punches: None Multis: None Rhyming skills: Lyrical Mage Verbal skills: C-Hood overall vote goes to: C-Hood
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07-19-05, 06:50 PM
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IP: 0B40 34FB
uppin on this right here yo heard me nig
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07-20-05, 10:01 PM
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IP: 25AC 4BDA
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07-25-05, 10:41 AM
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07-26-05, 09:35 AM
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Light Weight
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08-01-05, 01:13 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 5E9A 158A
Voted For: lyrical mage
Aye you had better punch lines and better messeges that boyzinthehood shit was hot you won hommie keep it up fam
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08-06-05, 05:10 PM
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The Saviour
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IP: 6434 BAA6
Voted For: lyrical mage
C-Hood: Nothing hit hard, had some good similes in there though. Your structure ain't too good, try keeping the lines about the same length, as a couple of lines were really stretched. Work on coming up with better concepts as well. Lyrical Mage: Nothing really hit except that Andy Milinokis line in my opinion, which basically won you this battle as both of you were even in everything else. It was the best line of the battle, the concept was real nice, but it could have been worded so much better to hit harder, still the best line though. v/ Lyrical Mage |
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