Voted For: 3-Dimensional

nice verse dropped here by 3-d..:
good use of vocab skills there....ur opning was good but the ending was a bit weak and needs some elevation......................................... .

ur best punch is:
Lyrical Mage this is a lyrical maze/
People might felt you at first now you a lyrical phase/

ur weakest punch is:
The fact that you can rhyme a little is still a miracle/
You got to use ya old rhymes so you got a mirror flow/...

nice battle.....

Vote: 3-D

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Voted For: 3-Dimensional

Good ....nice...punchlines I liked the baby teathing this you won but I wanna see some deepa shit outta you next time kid.

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Voted For: 3-Dimensional

3-dimensional
Lyrical Mage this is a lyrical maze/
People might felt you at first now you a lyrical phase/
^nice opener good use of words^
I know reading this you ducked from the moment you saw it/
You flows the clothing line boss from 98 its garbage/
^good personal..kinda weak though^
How you go post your baby picture under flyweight/
I know if your girl saw me she’d be my date/
^Haha again good personal got him good^
If You even got a girl you probably got a man with new tits added/
You trapped in the closet get out like Rufus you dick addict/
^good way to mix in r.kellys video...good punch^
The biggest loser in student’s yearbooks is what you had to sign/
Tried to buy punchlines but bankrupt ya clock’s on hammertime/
^gOOD punch kinda weak^
Somebody shoulda drowned you for using the word lyrical/
The fact that you can rhyme a little is still a miracle/
Good word usage and very hard hitting punch^
You got to use ya old rhymes so you got a mirror flow/
Call this cat an infant he teething on mixtapes and stealing those/
^best line hard punch right hurr^
Same lines that rappers use to diss his type/
“Lyrical mage is a man” he pull down his pants women say sike/
girls say his dick the length of they babies ultrasound height/
^HAHAHAH pretty good closer^

Lyrical mage

you say you can spit but ill take that chance....
yo ass cant spitt even if you did the rain dance...
^Weak opener not a good punch^
yo say you a legend?man that just too fictional...
i cant see yo rhymes even if they were 3 dimensional...
^forced the rhyme right there.....didnt hit hard^
im like a drug persciption with many side effects....
nausia, headaches, and a your whack reality check...
^you talk about urself more than u diss him^
so dont go around calling niggas hos and bitches...
just cause you want us dont mean we can grant yo wishes...
^bad closer not a hard hitting punch^
-NO HATE JUST STATING MY OPINION
v/3-dimensional
RTF!

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