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Old 07-28-05, 12:07 PM   #16
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^It really is...

lol.

VOTE!!!!
 
Old 07-29-05, 12:00 AM   #17
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Upping..............................
 
Old 07-30-05, 02:37 PM   #18
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Upping for ppl to start voting already....
 
Old 07-30-05, 05:53 PM   #19
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Voted For: Spektikul

Kids A Pussy...Spek Has No Actions............ Never Merked Shit
Your Sweet...Life Hands You Lemons To Blends In With Your Verses
^^wat the hell.....shit sucked
Herb Bitch, Clap A Teck Get Buried Next To Vets What The All Say
Your Punches Always Been Cracked.......Like Speks In The Hallway
^^Ok mutlie I guess...punch lacked
8 Lines Of Hotness From You? I Doubt It Why The Hell You Spittin
Cause Like Olds Folks You Only Need Speks To Watch The Television
^^Good rhymin...OK punch
With That Wackness....... Keep Quiet Or You'll Really Get Touched
Ya Hoods Pussy..You'll Only See Canada Ride Out In Delivery Trucks
^^STronger rhyming...bad punch

U got nice rhyme scheme and shit....but you lack the punches.Where are your personals too?90% of ya verses should be peronals.I didn't see any wordplay either.JUst had some similes and shit that didn't hit hard.

Hows this kid plan to win, he made an alias just to battle Spek
Know he saying "fuck you, pay me"? Look how quick he left his battle cheque (check)
^^^Nice...wordplay good...
We call you bitches cause its true, its a R.eal A.ll W.oman crew
R.A.W's just like your avatar, cause you only got herbs stading behind you
^^LMao....DOPE
Tell me what your loyal to, wait, go get more wins against wack kats first
14 wins against noobs, which would be your biggest accomplishment on Rapverse
^^ok.....not as good as the others
All woman crews audio section to me only sounds like a giant whore-moan (hormone)
Only reason you think your higher ranked than me right now is cause your-stonned
^^OK...

Good verse.Beautiful structure.Had a dope rip on crew and his past battles.A nice wordplay had begging.Nice line about the avatar.ONly complain would be the basic rhyme sheme.

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Old 07-30-05, 05:57 PM   #20
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar

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Flow-kor- Was Nice And It Was More Enjoyable To Read
Pers-was Also Won By Kor Cuz There Were Some Punches That Surprised Me
Evrything Else Was Even So Kor Gets Ma Vote
 
Old 07-31-05, 03:19 AM   #21
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Macreep Stop Being Mih Personal Dicc Succer Every Battle You Voted Against Me Get Out Of Here Kid...........
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Old 08-01-05, 11:20 AM   #22
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Just blacklist him Kor ^

UPPING.......................
 
Old 08-01-05, 02:56 PM   #23
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Old 08-01-05, 04:59 PM   #24
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Kids A Pussy...Spek Has No Actions............ Never Merked Shit
Your Sweet...Life Hands You Lemons To Blends In With Your Verses

OK, REASONABLE WORDPLAY, NOT A BAD OPENER.

Herb Bitch, Clap A Teck Get Buried Next To Vets What The All Say
Your Punches Always Been Cracked.......Like Speks In The Hallway

UMMM.... WHY IN THE HALLWAY BUT GOOD CONCEPT.

8 Lines Of Hotness From You? I Doubt It Why The Hell You Spittin
Cause Like Olds Folks You Only Need Speks To Watch The Television

SORTA PLAYED, BUT A DECENT PUNCH NONE THE LESS.

With That Wackness....... Keep Quiet Or You'll Really Get Touched
Ya Hoods Pussy..You'll Only See Canada Ride Out In Delivery Trucks

MEH, WORDPLAY WAS THERE, HALF DECENT PUNCH.

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Hows this kid plan to win, he made an alias just to battle Spek
Know he saying "fuck you, pay me"? Look how quick he left his battle cheque (check)

GOOD PERSONAL, ORIGINAL CONCEPT.

We call you bitches cause its true, its a R.eal A.ll W.oman crew
R.A.W's just like your avatar, cause you only got herbs stading behind you

LMAO DOPE PUNCH NICE PERSONAL GOOD WORDPLAY.

Tell me what your loyal to, wait, go get more wins against wack kats first
14 wins against noobs, which would be your biggest accomplishment on Rapverse

NICE PERSONAL, PUNCH WAS PRETTY MEH.

All woman crews audio section to me only sounds like a giant whore-moan (hormone)
Only reason you think your higher ranked than me right now is cause your-stonned

DECENT WORDPLAY, MADE ME LAUGH...GOOD CLOSER.

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OK, THIS WAS ONE SIDED IMO,

KORDOZAR HAD THE BETTER STRUCTURE AND A FEW GOOD IDEAS BUT LACKED ANY HARD HITTING PERSONALS,MOST THE SPEK SHIT HE USED HAS BEEN WAY PLAYED OUT.

SPEK CAME HARDER WITH EVERYBAR AND HAD SOME NICE PERSONALS WHICH HIT HARD.

AS I SAID ONE-SIDED.

NO HATE.

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Old 08-02-05, 01:52 AM   #25
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Old 08-02-05, 09:47 AM   #26
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Old 08-04-05, 01:52 PM   #27
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Old 08-05-05, 02:29 AM   #28
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul

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I liked the word choice.. lemme break it down tho to be more specific.

(Hows this kid plan to win, he made an alias just to battle Spek
Know he saying "fuck you, pay me"? Look how quick he left his battle cheque (check))
- one thing i notice right away.. there is no solid flow.. i cant read this with any consistency.. this isnt a great line to begin with but i cant even try to explain the first verse.

(We call you bitches cause its true, its a R.eal A.ll W.oman crew
R.A.W's just like your avatar, cause you only got herbs stading behind you)
- i like the first part of this.. the flow thing got me again.. but not bad of a stab at all.

(Tell me what your loyal to, wait, go get more wins against wack kats first
14 wins against noobs, which would be your biggest accomplishment on Rapverse)
- i gotta be honest.. this bit was weak.. it seems like i had to read a book just to get to the kats first - rapverse rhymes..

(All woman crews audio section to me only sounds like a giant whore-moan (hormone)
Only reason you think your higher ranked than me right now is cause your-stonned)
- alright


Overall - If i could vote for this.. it would go to Spek.. i wont breakdown kortozar cuz im really not feeling a single word he got down. Spek, i see where ur going with ur multi-syllable rhyming, but you def need to work on the rest of your body.. It looks like you just through a bunch of shit together and put 2 rhymes at the end.. ur better off not doing that and creating an easy to read flow.. but not bad at all.. pe@ce
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Old 08-09-05, 12:15 PM   #29
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Old 08-10-05, 12:35 PM   #30
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