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Old 08-15-05, 02:50 PM   #16
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get the vote from tony green and remove it....its unexplained!!!!! BLOODY HELL
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Old 08-24-05, 10:05 AM   #17
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uping............................................. ............
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Old 08-25-05, 10:40 PM   #18
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uping this shit is stilll open?..............................
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Old 08-27-05, 08:36 PM   #19
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uping man.........................................
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Old 08-28-05, 12:17 AM   #20
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Old 08-28-05, 12:40 PM   #21
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Old 08-28-05, 01:03 PM   #22
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This was feedback posted for .Merkage.

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checkin pollz............................................. .
 
Old 08-31-05, 06:26 PM   #23
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Old 08-31-05, 06:35 PM   #24
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This bitch coming up in here tryin to flex these stripes
The Man has a fucked up face of Wesley Snipes
2...no....wtf?...simple as fuck!!
.Merkage. is a fag coz he be lyrically writing shit
dude didnt even start selling drugs...till he bought a drug dealing starter kit
2....it's like you ain't even trying
as i beat his ass...he'll be none
coz ya fucked crew members still dont know ya name son
1...forced rhyme...streched line..and stupuid punch

Element he juss blowing "wind" but i'll "fire" to leave this man "iced" under da "earth"
But i forgot the "element of suprise" dat god used on his parents during his birth
4.....wasn't feelin this much...didn't really hit hard
you aint a killa..ya a "clean fruit lookin" 4 death.. moms "raisan grapes"
say ya amazing grace.."I'll lace and scuff" dude like A "Bathing APE"(a shoe)
5...ok concept but multis were a bit forced
O-O look like his record wearing glasses but he can't see wit a blind crew
u got no support..he can race cripples and you can see no one stands behind u
6...decent..
It may seem element he gettin "F'd up" wit his so called "A-team"
But i'll put bullets to his head in his "sleep" so hollow tips can "decay dreams"
5.......ok..but enough "gangsta" lines.

Well...Fokuss got this shit

Element..wtf is that u posted?U were just bassically stating shit.face fuked up like wesley snipes?Weslney snipes has a normal face son.And...he can't sell drugs without a drug dealin starter kid?SOn....is there even such a thing as that!?!?

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Rtf below in 3 days or this vote will be removed
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Old 09-01-05, 12:04 AM   #25
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uppin so i can close dis shit.........................
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Old 09-03-05, 11:50 AM   #26
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uppin ..................................................
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Old 02-11-06, 01:12 PM   #27
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can we get this closed plz................. i juss came back and this is still open
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Old 02-12-06, 04:58 PM   #28
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Voted For: .Merkage.

hmmm this was a wierd battle... not too many punches were thrown by either guy... both ended a lot better than they started... but it looks like to topical cats in a text styled non-topical battle... didn't seem to play to either of their strengths... -Fokuss- had the better verse with multis, inter-connecting rhymes and a lil wordplay... but the punches were all lack luster... Element's last line was his best line and one of the best in teh battle... Fokuss's last line was creative but not a punch... (it was a stand out line... but it just wouldn't hurt anyone's feelings)

Opener: Fokuss (creative, Elemental refferance)
Closer: Elemental (only line of note in his verse)
Punches: Niether (Fokuss threw more but none really landed, & Elemental's last line wasn't enough to really take this catagory either)
Personals: Neither ... (personals are direct punches... so the same thing I said for punches applies here)
Creativity: Fokuss
Complexity: Fokuss
Multies: Fokuss

Vote: Fokuss
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Old 02-12-06, 10:26 PM   #29
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i liked this verse more better cus it had better rymes and flow
but i didnt like the A-TEAM thing cus im in a gang thats called that but im judging this battle
element ur verse coulda used better rymes and a little more line fixing they have to flow nicer

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Old 02-12-06, 10:52 PM   #30
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Element: you didnt have shit in this verse. this was horrible. no punchez, no personalz, even if you attempted they didnt hit. work on making a real verse.

fokuss: some conceptz were aight, some werent. this verse was ok overall, not the best ive ever read, but not the worse. just keep postin.

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