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08-24-05, 08:43 AM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Hahaha shit it wasn't posting for me lastnight, but looks like it acctually did. Meh, this makes the 4th post of mine in a row, sorry for the clogging yo.
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08-24-05, 08:48 AM
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#17
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E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for Tony Green
IP: B1F9 8A99
checkin polls........................................
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08-24-05, 11:13 AM
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got u all confused n shit
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This was feedback posted for Tony Green
IP: 6FDF B803
pooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllll lllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz
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"don't assume me Im not what you're used to"
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08-25-05, 02:59 PM
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GeNeRaL
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This was feedback posted for Tony Green
IP: 05EA A558
Damn this was a great battle,i read TG and mad emotional
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08-25-05, 03:35 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Thanxx man I think I took this one...................
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08-26-05, 02:24 PM
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original.
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
IP: 9E2F CDE8
OSB represent those barndoors across the nation
good drop my e-friend 
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don't try....just STFU
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08-26-05, 02:26 PM
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original.
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
oh yeah, ps.....to tony, don't use links in a topical.....ruins the effect, lmlo
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don't try....just STFU
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08-26-05, 11:45 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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Lol @ that. Veyetal!!!! Sup homeboy. BARNDOOR.....
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 88 miles per hour should do it. |
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08-27-05, 02:24 PM
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#24
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Nt Your Average
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This was feedback posted for Tony Green
IP: 2075 AD82
pollllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzz.....
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OYD MAFIA
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08-28-05, 01:00 PM
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
IP: 68F3 D87D
checkin pollzzzzz ..
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08-28-05, 09:28 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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Lol @ him thinking he got it......................
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88 miles per hour should do it. |
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08-30-05, 12:33 AM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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uppiin maybe? ........................................
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88 miles per hour should do it. |
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09-01-05, 11:14 AM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
My boy should have this. 1-0, keep it up. The Establismento!
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09-01-05, 08:00 PM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Why ain't kiddos be voting on this..
Lets go... Soul Rebel said so.. |
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09-02-05, 01:26 AM
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IP: 06D9 5203
Voted For: Tony Green
Tony Green-Nice drop here.Followed topic nicely.Liked the twist in the storyline at end of the verse too.Flow was off at points(mainly the end)... due to some lines not rhyming.Like this one "I made 6 figures the concert's still going on.... The only connection to my stickly mother is my cell phone" ^^didn't rhyme. But at the beggining..there were some internals n shit that flowed nicely.Not a very complex verse here...but still good.Keep it up. One step beyond-Well...you had a more complex verse with metaphors and such.More direct with the topic and shit.But...i didn't enjoy it as much as I did to Tony Green's one.Flow was your biggest problem.Too many lines didn't rhyme at all.Had a good vocab...so that's good.But it didn't really impact ur verse. Vote-Tony Green rtf the favor below(it's topical) in 3 days...or this vote will be removed  http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909 |
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