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Old 09-08-05, 07:28 PM   #16
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Old 09-08-05, 07:41 PM   #17
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uppin.........werd................................ .....
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Old 09-09-05, 08:47 AM   #18
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werd......................3 DQ'd votes.............thats fuckt up...o well yall need to explain ya shyt more...pCe.............uppin
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Old 09-09-05, 10:13 AM   #19
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Voted For: AITZ

Flow: Aitz
Structure: Aitz
Word Play: Green Party!
Punches: Aitz
Personals: Aitz
Creativity: Green Party!
Enjoyment: Both
Vote: Aitz
Explanation: Green Party if u look closely... his sig pic color its red. not pink... But overall Aitz came harder on this one.
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Old 09-09-05, 08:46 PM   #20
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werd...good explaination bro, thats how i do it sometimes...


uppin 4 votes on this, lets get it closed
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Old 09-10-05, 01:24 AM   #21
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alright both verses were weak ass hell.. i mean ur vocab was aiight but both of ur structures we way off and both of ur punches werent hittin hard at all.. just elevate on ur verses.. thats all. u know... so i say its a TIE!!!!!!
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Old 09-11-05, 07:26 AM   #22
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a TIE???, dude, you gotta be jokin. i had 3 DQ'd votes...

im uppin on votes..and i will RTF!
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Old 09-11-05, 10:28 AM   #23
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Green Party-
You had ok punches and bad personals…. I didn’t really get a lot of it, The structure was a lot better this is was really close battle in my opinion- I had to re read this… If you would have stretched it out a little more you would have got my vote




AITZ-
You had ok punches and ok personals, and the flow was pretty good I liked it, structure was coo too could have been better but who cares. Overall good punches and I liked your verse better This is no D/R I don’t even know you

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Old 09-11-05, 08:53 PM   #24
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aiight, cheers on the vote......hell i don't know you either..but chyeah nice lookin out


we uppin..
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Old 09-12-05, 12:09 AM   #25
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I got your votes DQ'd because they weren't explained...and neither was Kriz's vote,seems fishy to me...uppin this ya'll.
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Old 09-12-05, 04:05 PM   #26
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u lose cuz ur shit is whack...............HATE FEEDBACK

TRY EXPLAINING UR VOTES WITH GOOD REASONS!!!!!!
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Old 09-12-05, 06:43 PM   #27
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This battle was pretty much one sided,

GreenParty!-Ur verse was not quite appealing.You had very poor structurre that made the flow unbearable.Ur punches were poor and weak hitting, And had some forced rhymes in there....Ur personals were forced and not hard hitting......you have a lot of room for elevation.

Aitz-Ur verse was not that enjoyable either, It was poorly structuredWhich didnt really effect it, due to the mediocore punches that landed softly....due to ur good wordplay and such.Ur personals were also up there wit ur punches...although nothing special.I felt some of ur lines was stretched but still had a better verse.

V/AITZ

please rtf in my sig links, since i kindly voted on urs...be sure to leave honest explained vote.....unless u want this vote to be dq'd
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Old 09-12-05, 08:28 PM   #28
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I got your votes DQ'd because they weren't explained...and neither was Kriz's vote,seems fishy to me...uppin this ya'll.



dude, your fuckin trippin??....ok ok ok i understand the unexplained votes..

but see the rapchat site in my sig...click on it n check out how we do our voting...same way that kriz cat does it, he just probally from another site like me...


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Old 09-13-05, 05:05 PM   #29
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Old 09-14-05, 07:27 PM   #30
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