Voted For: Shazz

idk about this one but,
i liked this, but both verses were good,
lets see..
flow was ight, could have been better,
vocab was straight,
personals umm.. were there.. :/
multi's..were isght..

V/Shazz

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Voted For: Black Arts

I saw your battles, shawn, soft like titty porn so stop please
Even bored yourself halfway through your name and caught Zz**

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Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously
Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously

black arts defiantely got this 1 for he had mor punches and i actually k.o knew what he was saying...NO HATE u gotta elevate man.......both of ya'll do....NO HATE...

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Voted For: Black Arts

black arts has this one by far...better punches, real personal shit, better flowz and overall better verse...a piece if advise for shazz...if tht was all in 6 mins, i suggest u spend a bit more time on ur rapz

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Voted For: Black Arts

some good punches by BA, witty if not hard-hitting
rofl at u callin him a tit
shazz's first bar dont rhyme, n the rest of the punches arent witty OR hard-hittin, so ba's better there
nothin else really stood out, so BA wins

vote- Black Arts

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Voted For: Shazz

Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously
Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously

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I saw your battles, shawn, soft like titty porn so stop please Even bored yourself halfway through your name and caught Zz

I liked shazz's verse better it had better flow, and i liked the punches

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Voted For: Black Arts

Your not even on my level for me to battling black arts
He talkin to me on aim…. like he new to this rap game
3....didn't rhyme...and how is talking to you on AIM making him "new" to the rap game?
If this was audio….ya would mumble like Mike Jones
Like you right now you in strees… just a bunch of moans
3....weak.....
Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously
Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously
2....what are talking about him repeating for?

I'm here to break your flow, i'm coming ready or not like fugees
Like the rapist on the wing this nigga only fucks with newbies*
4...ok...at least it's an attempt of a personal
Foo please couldn't be wanker if your flow rubbed in your man's hand
I'm making tits like you hit floor like Pamela doing a handstand
4....kinda played...
I saw your battles, shawn, soft like titty porn so stop please
Even bored yourself halfway through your name and caught Zz**
5...in the 1st line..the "shawn" part came outta no where....but the punch was nice,

Ok...One-sided
I am being brutaly honest here,Shazz.
ur verse was horrible.ANd I don't care about that 6 mins. excuse.U had mad time to make ur verse...so why would you spend just 6 minutes on it?Don't make excuses son.
As for ur punches....weak.That 1st bar...why is talking to someone on AIM mean they "new" to the rap game?I don't see any reason it would mean that.And that last bar...why would u say he repeats?Cos if he spits 2 bars that are different from each other..then you automatically look stupid as he didn't repeat himself.And that's borderline fake personal.Think ya bars through and make sure they make sence next time.

Vote-Black Arts
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Voted For: Shazz

shazz came stronger in this battle and with more punches . he had a good structure and he was personal
vt/shazz

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you cannot seriously believe that lame ass vote aint gettin removed

i think this was a weak battle . or maybe the people on rapbattles.com are better but thats not the point , in this battle neither opponent came with a flo or somethin unique and the amount of lines left no space for creativity.

Shazz-
I like your verse not bad....But you were alot better back then when you were on RB this kinda sucks compared to others, You have lost your touch...Your wordplay was alright.....Flow was good,

black arts-
weak u didnt sho me anything personal and u didnt sho any emotion or solid punches . i hope this was a weak battle for u.

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sorry i posted more shit after i voted , i know that it was bad feed the first time
dont hate cuz u had one vote against u
this is supposed to help u elevate not work on anger management

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Voted For: Shazz

Shazz-
Verse was ok, The wordplay was ok the flow was pretty good. Its like you just spit from the top of your head but it guess thats ok. Ive seen you do alot better this was kinda weak. Your first 2 lines were pretty played out, Your ended ok though, The mike jones one i got it was alright. but it was enough to win it.

Black Arts-
Your verse was alot different then his, Your flow was basic and that one pamela handstand shit wasen't getting that really at all....did you do research on him? shawn? that came out of no where....Didn't make sense to me either its like you know his name but what could you do with it?... Didn't get your verse too much. And The ZZ is played
v/shazz

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nah im cool now that i saw some decent feed

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