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Old 11-06-05, 03:54 PM   #16
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Voted For: ThatNigga

This is way to obvious, that nigga won this, no questions asked he killed him, illist's lines were way to short and didn't really have any good punch-lines at all, that nigga had some good ones, so I'm goin wit him.
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Old 11-10-05, 12:23 PM   #17
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lmao^...
..if thats not dr, then i dont know what is.
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Old 11-10-05, 04:55 PM   #18
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lmao^...
..STFU thats not dickriding its telling tha truth DUMBASS, he couldnt dickride me cuz he doesent know me fuckface
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Old 11-10-05, 05:55 PM   #19
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I don't think that vote was dr.. but I still think ThatNigga lost.
 
Old 11-10-05, 05:57 PM   #20
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Whatt up? This is how I think it wen't down...

ThatNigga-
This dick riding faggot is fuckin stressing me like whoa
He hangin off tha tip of my dick and he wont let go
^^^^Played out in my opinion, it was decent.

Couldn’t pull a bitch if wanted, this niggaz scared of the clit
You could call him chuck, cuz u know u quick 2 get sticked*
^^^^First line played in my opinion, chuck line was decent

Ill blast this nigga wit 1 clip dropping mad bricks he wont get up this time
Im gon leave this dirty mutha fucka missin thas why they call it victimless crime
^^^^^These lines were too long, second line was good

“Illist” what an original name dawg, theres no one else like you
ill rip yo ass 2 shreds, and anyone else that got a problem despite who
^^^^^Lines kinda long once again, b oth lines were coo'

overall ThatNigga, in my opinion you should work on originality, punches, and structure more..it helps homie

overall-6/10

Illest-
I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla'
use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record..
.............and beat the pro portion outta ya
^^^^^Nice opener.. structure kinda weird

Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me..
..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe.
^^^^Lol real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe..

It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame..
..I didn't even have to peep a verse.
..I figured that out by your sig n username!
^^^^^Nice wording and punch..weird structure once again

punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation-
It's a parent ya wack...
.... like havin' kids from masturbation..
^^^^^LOL at masturbation line..weird structure

overall-Structure was kinda different but the verse was overall nice with v ocab, wording, punches..

vote-Illest because his punches and wordplay was more effective towards ThatNigga in my opinion..Nice job niggas..
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Old 12-11-05, 10:27 PM   #21
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pollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllllllllz
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Old 01-27-06, 02:17 PM   #22
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Voted For: ThatNigga

this really was a weak battle with that being said... YL just threw a couple of harder punches than Illest... but not by much...

Opener: YL
Closer: YL
Punches: YL
Personals: Illest
Creativity: Illiest
Complexity: Illest
Structure: None
Enjoyment: None

Vote: YL
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Old 01-29-06, 02:11 AM   #23
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Old 02-04-06, 04:52 AM   #24
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I may like bacon but I'll eat some pancakes too. Word.

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Old 02-13-06, 11:44 PM   #25
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Voted For: ThatNigga

punches: TN
structure: TN
flow: Il
wordplay: TN

TN took this cuz his verse to me was a lot easier to read, an alright battle. TN had some pretty funny lines but a little side note, i think that implyin that ppl are gay is gettin a little played cuz it seems that its like the only insult i hear ppl call each other now a days
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Old 02-14-06, 01:00 AM   #26
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Voted For: ThatNigga

rofl @ Illist, wtf, sum of that shit didnt make scence at all. n there wuz like no punches.

I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla'
use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record..
.............and beat the pro portion outta ya
lmao, that wuz such bad rymin
Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me..
..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe.
wack
It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame..
..I didn't even have to peep a verse.
..I figured that out by your sig n username!
lmfao, wiggity wack
punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation-
It's a parent ya wack...
.... like havin' kids from masturbation..
i see u wuz tryna make a punch, but fucked it up.

V/Young Law, werd
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Old 02-15-06, 05:06 PM   #27
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Voted For: Illist

this was a pretty close one, neither were that great but illist came a little better with the punches. yall need to elevate
 
Old 02-15-06, 05:08 PM   #28
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i have elevated this is old as hell .
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Old 02-15-06, 07:50 PM   #29
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Voted For: ThatNigga

Illist: decent read, made me laugh a little...but ive seen one of those lines used before...im not sayin you bit, it was just not new. good flow, the structure was wack tho. but structure dont determine W's...punches do, yours were aight. good punches, but none really seemed to relate. but like i said, decent read.

young law: hmm stretched and blown, but new and original. i like the opener. the close was aight. yea it flowed decently, but you structure was wack as well..but fuck it, your punches related, and hit well...so your takin it.

vote: young law...

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