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11-23-05, 01:02 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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This was feedback posted for Epic.
IP: 9457 B83E
ok your flow was on poiunt along with structure
lines were straight id like to see more personals but u had some original lines so mad props on that street came very played structure was bad so it threw the flow off also jjsut elevate i saw a few good lines though
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11-23-05, 08:08 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
Good Looking Out Ma...Not My Best I'm Rusty Bin Gone For A While.
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12-01-05, 04:58 PM
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New to RV
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This was feedback posted for Epic.
IP: 2029 97B3
polls............................................. ....................
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12-19-05, 08:15 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
Ey Up................................................ .........
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12-25-05, 01:28 AM
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IP: 2029 97B3
Ey.........................Bumping................ .....
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12-26-05, 04:32 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
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