i wrote it in anotha battle u fuckin asshole instigator fuck u sin...n yea i know not much 4 punches in this but i really didnt try cuz wuts the sense of writtin a hot verse 4 a battle if u kno da sites hataz gonna vote the otha person n e ways jus 2 b childish pricks like dat

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my first battle since comin back 2 rv

lyrical hustla dont sleep rv

if i reply 2 ya post return da love heres my links

do you ever stop complaning? stfu kid

vote

Voted For: Coherent.

vote- coherent
coherent was ehhh decent i guess...
you tried to hard to have too much word play...
dopeness lies in being concise but ..mediocre punches at best
third punch and first are a lil played
work on the flow
so 4/10


other guy..wow that sUCKED...not a hate vote
but try to be witty and not sound like 50 cent or some shit..im sorry to have to break it to you
flow was off!

butkeep battling and youll get better

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thank you...i've seen his work before so that explains the weak drop, no excuses though, i won anyway just to shut him up, uppin for the KO vote

Voted For: Coherent.

i dont know about this joint, this wasn't a very good battle, but ima have to say that coherent won this one. He had better wordplay and his rhymes made more sense.
Coherent had more actual punches in his verse which made him get the win. but to me yall both could have done alot better.

I aint hatin on allikwarawkilla but some of your bars just weren't workin homie. keep at it though.
return dat favor links are in the sig............

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Killa you got owned man, your shits still not rhyming right
and your punches don't hit at all,.. no personals come on
so u should have the basics down by now.

I think your right to change to 2 line rhyming should make
it easy for u to rhyme.

Keep rhyming like this but u need harder punches.

stay up

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ayt i understand my lines might b 2 ghettofied or stretched sumtimes but damn i aint neva been told i dont rhyme....i rhyme every line i write u jus gotta pay attention....i kno peeps can read but sum times i feel peeps should go back 2 school cuz if u on a rap site n cant understand ur genre's slang u got issues seriously but thanx 4 da honest real shit though...im still workin on shit but ya'll also gotta keep in mind 4 da most part i speed rap so sum lines will stretch but i can do dat n still make it sound hot in audio...uppin this

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my first battle since comin back 2 rv

lyrical hustla dont sleep rv

if i reply 2 ya post return da love heres my links

shouldn't this be a KO?

upping, i guess i need 5 votes, hit this up and leave links

Voted For: Coherent.

This battle was a joke.

Coherent. won easily.

Vote: Coherent.

1 more vote please....and thank you

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