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Old 10-15-04, 09:32 AM   #6
Yvonne
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just like ur name states..no matta how many times u spit u'll always be infamouz
if you got stumped on the street..got ur ass net clipped..you cant 4kin blame uz
im makin you pack heat by the hotness from my spit..tell me how the slap feels
bend him over like a bitch..and break his anus in..then u'll see his achived lines drip
you battlin some1 like me,u'll neva reach my left knee..ya aint hit ya pubic yet
he spread his lips on d mic,thro his slippry lines while he bite,dats d only time he got it wet
dopness is defined as wackness gets quickly declined..i wanted a gd rapper,bicth r u blind?
i took a look at his lines..found it punch deprived..i still wouldnt find 'em if i pushed rewind


-if you dont get the lines of both then dont vote...

-quick key..couldnt be arsed too reserch w/e he done....

-votes shall be returned honestly....

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Old 10-15-04, 09:37 AM   #7
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u neva knew me b4..those are some fake personals ....






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Old 10-15-04, 09:37 AM   #8
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Voted For: Yvonne

just like ur name states..no matta how many times u spit u'll always be infamouz
if you got stumped on the street..got ur ass net clipped..you cant 4kin blame uz
im makin you pack heat by the hotness from my spit..tell me how the slap feels
bend him over like a bitch..and break his anus in..then u'll see his achived lines drip
you battlin some1 like me,u'll neva reach my left..ya aint hit ya pubic yet
he spread his lips on d mic,thro his slippry lines while he bite,dats d only time he got it wet
dopness is defined as wackness gets quickly declined..i wanted a gd rapper,bicth r u blind?
i took a look at his lines..found it punch deprived..i still wouldnt find 'em if i pushed rewind

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES GOOD PERSONALS AND FLOW


u asked for ur next victim on ur list, answered ur callout now ur sayin its not fair n ur pissed/
bitch i can't keep this error to exist, resist wit cha fist but i'll still put terror in this bitch/
twist n persist but u won't stop bleeding, smash u so hard ur b known as the defeat queen/
stop pleading, i saw some of ur battles, read one word of ur verse n stopped reading/
infact is that i told this cat to recognize now juss check out her stat/*
fact is that u wack, wanna try ta beat me?chea, fact is that u can't/
she said its unfair, told her to understand, n she said under where/
'ma done ripoed out the pink heart out ur chest,it will be ya closest affair
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE VERSE INFAM NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS


V-YVONNE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES

IT WAS AN WEAK BATTLE NOTHIN GOOD OR TO LOOK AT BUT ANYWAY YVONNE CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND FLOW ALTHOUGH SHE FELL OFF IN SOME PARTS I STILL THINK SHE GOT IT

INFAM-NICE VERSE GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND FLOW

BUT DA PUNCHES AND DA WORDS-CHOSIN WERE TOO BASIC NOT AN GOOD VOCAB IN YO VERSE AND PLUS DA STRUTURE WASNT GOOD EITHER FROM DA TOP IT WAS COOL DEN AT DA CLOSA IT JUST GOT ME CONFUSE BUT ANYWAY GOOD VERSE NICE BATTLE GOOD PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT TOO BASIC AND YVONNE NCIE VERSE GOOD BATTLE U HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS 'OK"

MY VOTE GOES TO-YVONNE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW AND PERSONALS

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Old 10-15-04, 09:40 AM   #9
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O And Yvonne Or Infam Return An Honest Vote In My Battle Links Are In Da Sig Honest Vote Thanks I Preciated
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Old 10-15-04, 02:48 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for Yvonne

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this was an aight battle ive seen alot better from both
ya personals and metas were pretty much average
ya punches were ok both of u provided about 6/10 quality
you can use some elevation and some metas and better personals

.....Nuff Said.....
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