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Old 08-12-04, 05:11 PM   #16
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Voted For: hotshh!

damn once again

Ya own Mother wouldnt 'Sign' U wit the Language of da Deaf!*
U couldnt drop a bootleg album in Spanish On Cassette!
how does he think of this>>>>>>>>>
Jono my 'son', I thought ya Moms had an Abortion!
U shouldnt start 'beef' when Ya Talent is Salad Tossing!
damn!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Good Riddens! I burnt U son they smell the Aroma
Never 'Call me Out', Im of the Hook, So Hang Da Phone UP!!!!
im almost pissin on myself>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
hot shh won!


jono: ur shit was aight but tha end was really a bad way to end it.
n think of betta punches.
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Old 08-12-04, 05:19 PM   #17
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Voted For: hotshh!

this was a kinda wack battle
Vote goes to hotshh for not being so wack and having better punches and k personals also ya structure was good
jono you neeed elevating, and ya structure isnt that good
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Old 08-12-04, 05:20 PM   #18
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Old 08-12-04, 05:27 PM   #19
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Voted For: hotshh!

ummmm... ok....

besides jono's first line... notice i didn't say bar... he really didn't bring anything to the table. I mean... in his last bar he rhymed made with made...that won't get you a win in this forum unless the other dude was actually worse.

hot had better structure and all his shyt rhymed except for the steve austin line... those two things alone was enough to win it. there were plenty of played concepts but overall hot's verse was better.
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Old 08-12-04, 10:55 PM   #20
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Old 08-12-04, 11:44 PM   #21
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imma start with JONO...yo flow was aight, but nobody understand wut u was saying...nice work tho...i hate yo structure, but you had nice punches...but not too many personals in there...*elevate*

hotshh: merked, sonn'ed, murdered, you pick, i think its all the above...gotta give this to u cause u came consistent from start to finish...this was the best i think i ever seen you come...hard punches and multies...nice structure...you even switch up yo style in each flow, thats talent...i cant say that i seen a flaw in this battle...but everyone could elevate

good flow people

drop votes on the below battles people..u too jono...all HONEST
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Old 08-13-04, 12:01 AM   #22
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Voted For: hotshh!

open: Hot, jono's was aiight but Hot's waz better
close: Hot, jono rhymed the same word twice
personals: Hot, jono had them but hots were better
metas: Hot, the cat line won him the meta vote
punches: Tie, both were good
multis: Hot, had some good ones

Hot: This battle was one-sided dawg, good job.
You had basically everything I look for in voting on battles.
Also props on ya structure man, I dig an organized verse...

Jono: You didnt really have any hard Personals, metas, or multies...I would have to say elevate in thos areas son.
Also, clean up ya structure a bit man, that was just look sloppy as I read it especially because you changed the formatting in it half way through, be carefull with that shit.
Win: Hotshh!

Props to both, payce...

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