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08-12-04, 05:11 PM | #16 | |||
Apollyon
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IP: C1DA C961
Voted For: hotshh!
damn once again Ya own Mother wouldnt 'Sign' U wit the Language of da Deaf!* U couldnt drop a bootleg album in Spanish On Cassette! how does he think of this>>>>>>>>> Jono my 'son', I thought ya Moms had an Abortion! U shouldnt start 'beef' when Ya Talent is Salad Tossing! damn!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Good Riddens! I burnt U son they smell the Aroma Never 'Call me Out', Im of the Hook, So Hang Da Phone UP!!!! im almost pissin on myself>>>>>>>>>>>>>> hot shh won! jono: ur shit was aight but tha end was really a bad way to end it. n think of betta punches.
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08-12-04, 05:19 PM | #17 | |||||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 6B29 12E8
Voted For: hotshh!
this was a kinda wack battle Vote goes to hotshh for not being so wack and having better punches and k personals also ya structure was good jono you neeed elevating, and ya structure isnt that good
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08-12-04, 05:20 PM | #18 | |||||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 6B29 12E8
please vote on this battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141855
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08-12-04, 05:27 PM | #19 | ||||
Back In Business
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IP: 9DD1 2DB9
Voted For: hotshh!
ummmm... ok.... besides jono's first line... notice i didn't say bar... he really didn't bring anything to the table. I mean... in his last bar he rhymed made with made...that won't get you a win in this forum unless the other dude was actually worse. hot had better structure and all his shyt rhymed except for the steve austin line... those two things alone was enough to win it. there were plenty of played concepts but overall hot's verse was better. |
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08-12-04, 10:55 PM | #20 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 5407 5CCC
uppin fa votes
end this.......................... |
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08-12-04, 11:44 PM | #21 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: F6AB BAF7
Voted For: hotshh!
imma start with JONO...yo flow was aight, but nobody understand wut u was saying...nice work tho...i hate yo structure, but you had nice punches...but not too many personals in there...*elevate* hotshh: merked, sonn'ed, murdered, you pick, i think its all the above...gotta give this to u cause u came consistent from start to finish...this was the best i think i ever seen you come...hard punches and multies...nice structure...you even switch up yo style in each flow, thats talent...i cant say that i seen a flaw in this battle...but everyone could elevate good flow people drop votes on the below battles people..u too jono...all HONEST |
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08-13-04, 12:01 AM | #22 | |||||||
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: hotshh!
open: Hot, jono's was aiight but Hot's waz better close: Hot, jono rhymed the same word twice personals: Hot, jono had them but hots were better metas: Hot, the cat line won him the meta vote punches: Tie, both were good multis: Hot, had some good ones Hot: This battle was one-sided dawg, good job. You had basically everything I look for in voting on battles. Also props on ya structure man, I dig an organized verse... Jono: You didnt really have any hard Personals, metas, or multies...I would have to say elevate in thos areas son. Also, clean up ya structure a bit man, that was just look sloppy as I read it especially because you changed the formatting in it half way through, be carefull with that shit. Win: Hotshh! Props to both, payce... Please take the time with an hounest vote, as I do for you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141105 |
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