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08-05-04, 01:11 PM
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^^your prolly right except 4 seven third,but i put the post count high so noobs wouldnt vote so thats all i could really do...
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08-05-04, 04:33 PM
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uppin...com'on this is almost over....................
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08-05-04, 08:29 PM
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08-06-04, 03:18 AM
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08-06-04, 02:29 PM
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08-06-04, 05:50 PM
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damn this is still here.............uppin...............
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08-07-04, 04:26 AM
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08-07-04, 12:06 PM
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...tha princess of rv...
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Voted For: DV8
first off this was a pretty decent topical battle.....gud verses by both. i think dv8 came with the beta vocab.more complexity to his piece.....i enjoyed both stories,dv8`s beta vocab made his a lil more interestin ta read. structure/flow woz fairly even......i think both had a few lines.. that were a lil stretched or 2 short.try even em out more(although its not as important in a topical)..... gud imagery by both, again i was feelin dv8`s a lil more,as i like the way in which the story was started.and the lil interlude bits were funny....dv8 u started to fall off wit ur rhymin 2 wars the end whilst wonka stayed consistent throughout. overall id say......wonka up ya vocab,complexity.... dv8..try make ur lines rhyme a lil beta.. vote-dv8 tite battle but jus likin urs more..beta imagery
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