Originally Posted by e-dubz

you a local-ist.......... so imma blaze my nine at yo whole crew mans
cuz combined yo couldnt hit punch-lines if yo caught k-o’s at lemon-aid stands - punch aint lemonaid-0/10

so lower yo own possibility of a win when taste-less lines exit bitter lips
touch my flows? nah nigga........ not even if i pissed on yo finger tips-no2/10

this my home now yall as welcome as Manson was with Roman Pilanski’s wife
i got it out for yo, like black people do for MJ since hes tryin to pass fo white-corny 1/10

but i dont know why im wasting time on you, you couldn't put up half a fight
dollar bills could have King Arthur on em, you wouldn't be worth half a (knight
ok 3/10
yo whole family’s probably trash, and i ain’t even tryin to be mean
but fuck a win….... cuz shit is the only streak in yo genes(jeans)ok 3/10

cant stay up on beat...... always outta breath like asthmatics
this nigga always gettin laid down, time to call yo a Craftmatic-good punch finally a 8/10

any personals you write......... are your own lies misplaced-ok a
if CSI checks yo verses for talent....... they won't find a traceok a 4/10 played
dawg, whenever you spit........ and i have hunches you know
that like payed off boxers.......... you sacrifice punches for flow

Originally Posted by Phantom

evacuate yo buildin with explosives set to be flown fool...
im a low ryder, your 'dubz'...no fuckin wonder i own you...-dope personal a 10/10 hard ass line
you're a noob basher/wannabe vet, with no apparent skills...
ya crew rushin to 'clean up' like you was caught in a oil spill...ok 3/10

i'd claim you get d/r votes but you're barely known to exist...
you're like a manual on manure, just chokked full of "bullshit"...good punch a 5/10
why name yourself that? not even your bike has 20' spokes...
ill be 'smashing' til your 'bloody', make you a good british joke...lol good punch again a 6/10
this rapper/masturbatin virgin buys trojans to 'cum' with 'heat'...
someone told him to 'elevate' so he put womens shoes on his feet...-blah no 1/10
homos have their gay 'issues', but for you thats not the right depiction...
your 'issues' come in all the time, shit you have a 'lifetime subscription'...good again 4/10
come on nigga,you dont 'bring the noise' like a nonexistant riot..
plus your 'shit' dont feel right, like rosanne on the 'atkins diet'...good also a 4/10
i know this one is played, but "your title states you're an herb"...
i just 'popped' this 'dub' and set my left over 'rubber' on da curb...