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12-15-04, 06:32 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Livin Legend
snook, ya verse was wack...sry, but you really need to elevate...livin legend, ya verse was better than his, but you still didnt come with too many creative punches or wordplay...both verses flowed ok, but as for punches, livin legend gets this vote...Both need to elevate however...1 |
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12-15-04, 07:05 PM
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Only the Illist
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IP: 1AF0 6ADD
Voted For: Livin Legend
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahahaah... this battle was... WACK.... both of yall..... but one was wacker than the other............. Snook....- your shit was WACK to tha fullest... structure was messed up, even ya lines out goddamn.. u just ranted on and on and on and on about nothin... ya wordplay was bad, flow was horrible... rhyme scheme was bad, u had ZERO complexity... just horrible... not a punch u threw hit, personals the same way... overall i give u a 0.5/10 Livin- WACK... but not as wack... structure was horrible... couldnt even follow it, way to stretched FIX THAT... flow was hurt by the shit structure..... punches and shit were iffy but aight same with the personals.... complexity needs work and u need to be more creative... overall a 2/10... both of yalll..........ELEVATE LIKE SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VOTE- Livin |
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