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09-27-04, 04:15 PM
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If thats what you thought
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IP: D35B 3F85
Voted For: Lost & Found
LF- okay verse nothing special. The first bar was very funny. structure was kind of fucked with all them dots...but you had a nice flow with it. Lyrical content okay. but you got the format down jus a little with coming up with punches... Ls- vocab wasnt as good as Lf was and your punches werent that good...nothing stuck. structure was off a little...but okay. flow just wasnt as good as lost and founds. and up your vocab a little. I didnt get that john ritter line. I don't get the punch if it was one....
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10-04-04, 11:51 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 8D11 BB8D
Voted For: Lyriclesolja
yo this battle was wack... lost & found : ur verse didnt flow at all...u pieced some line that could flow...and ur structure was slacking too....but i'ld say ya had punches and some decent multiz..no personalds and no wordplay...u were majorly talkin of how u gon to kill him..thats what i saw...gd verse but need a lil more work (structure,flow,wordplay and personals) solja : ya verse didnt really flow too...ur opner was slacking ...but ur verse had atleast some wordplay..u too didnt have personals...but ur punches hit harder...and just like ur opponent ur verse didnt flow...ya gatta count ur syllabs a lil more...the only thing i liked about ur verse was the closer...that was good...but as for the rest u need to work on it a lil more... no hate to both tho... holla at mines (sig belo)...and be honest like i was right hurr!!!...thanx 
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10-04-04, 01:05 PM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 1D53 E0E2
Voted For: Lost &amp; Found
this was clsoe but ima give it to lost and found............here the break down.... opener tie closer lost punches lyricle personals lost flow lost vocab lyricle structure lyricle vote lost
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10-05-04, 08:03 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: F43F 74C8
Voted For: Lost &amp; Found
woah okay lost an found got this.... but dont use the dots in ya verse, i had to read it twice just to work out the structure, an thats a bad thing.. but yo, ya verse from what i could read had better punches an personals, more complex vocab, an alot more creativity ya got my vote hands down... just improve on the structure an return the fave in sig vs wish p e a c e
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