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This was feedback posted for :.anxiety.:
IP: 51A3 84F9
If i did not just read the most played lines then played needs a new definition..
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IP: 6CB8 12EC
The Liquor line was the only line i worked on... I don't know why... Maybe because im whack at text battling... And you know what... I don't give a fuck...
But the Liquor line owned his whole verse, just so you know... |
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: D69F 62AA
so.. you want this polling to keep going or you wanna take the loss and i take the win... liek you siad.. if we dont get any moer votes??
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Guess who?... ...Paramik Fuckin'...
...Owns You! ||RVS Text Champion||
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-BTR-
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Paramik
Paramik - ur verse was kinda good..your opener was creative but not really that good..you attacked his crew which is good and that second bar was funny..the only thing i didnt like about ur verse was ur closer... fav. line - CS is always Coming With Shit, but fuck ya crap aint the last….. Cause the only things that’s shit loaded…, is coming from ya ass. overall - 8/10 anxiety - honestly i dont know what the big hype is about you..everyone says ur really good..this verse wasnt too great..you had a clever opener using the personal..your second bar i understood but it wasnt really good..the priest line was lame..i liked the wordplay with the liquior..but ur closer was kinda wack... fav. line - On this site, ain’t no one whacker than Paramik… He couldn’t blow his shit up if he was an Arabic… overall - 7/10 vote - Paramik |
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