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Old 03-08-05, 11:44 PM   #31
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uppin for votes...........
 
Old 03-09-05, 10:40 PM   #32
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uppin for votes........damn this gettin slept on...
 
Old 03-10-05, 01:18 PM   #33
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!

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hotshh!! won this battle because his verse flowed better his rhymes rhymed better he had a nice closer and good punches ok multies i liked

cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen
Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics


.Grafh your verse was pretty good but the rhymes were off a little this was my favorite line

Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile

the first "gay oriented punchline" that acctually made sense that i've read in a while

overall ok battle

V/ Hotshh!!

but i dont got 800 votes sorry
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Old 03-10-05, 01:18 PM   #34
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!

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hotshh!! won this battle because his verse flowed better his rhymes rhymed better he had a nice closer and good punches ok multies i liked

cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen
Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics


.Grafh your verse was pretty good but the rhymes were off a little this was my favorite line

Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile

the first "gay oriented punchline" that acctually made sense that i've read in a while

overall ok battle

V/ Hotshh!!

but i dont got 800 votes sorry
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Old 03-11-05, 02:06 PM   #35
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Old 03-11-05, 07:24 PM   #36
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..........uppin for votes..........
 
Old 03-11-05, 09:16 PM   #37
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Voted For: hotshh!

this battle wasnt that big for me, i htink hot got it tho. I was feelin yo shit more hott. i think u came a lil harder wit punches, and personals in this one. I liked yo style in this one, and yo verse seemed to flow better also. I think you got this one.
Graphf, no hate, but yo verse was borin to me, and uninterestingg. I think u should elevate on puttin more feelin or sumthin into yo verses. But, i liked some of ur puches, not all, and i feel you came harder in metaphores, but i dont think yo overall verse was better in this one. NO hate, just my opinion.
Overall-this battle was kinda wack to me, wasnt feelin it that much, but i think hot got this one. Yo verse was better to me, and graf, i feel you lacked too many things in urs to take my vote...

NO HATE....plz RTF on last battle link in sig. and plz make it explained.

good battle yall....~1~

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Old 03-14-05, 08:28 PM   #38
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Old 03-15-05, 01:56 PM   #39
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Old 03-16-05, 08:52 AM   #40
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Old 03-16-05, 07:48 PM   #41
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uppin for votes...........
 
Old 03-18-05, 07:22 PM   #42
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Old 03-21-05, 09:06 PM   #43
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Old 03-22-05, 08:09 PM   #44
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Old 03-22-05, 08:42 PM   #45
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