Voted For: DoContinue

losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
^&^^
only line i liked in ya verse
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do continue, ya opener and closer were the only bars of your i "didn't like" so there ya goes.
best shitVVV
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back

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Voted For: Golden shellz

aight golden shellz took dis

golden shellz- yo ya shit was aight kind of basic but u had more creative punches n ya verse dey was hard hittin and dey was rite on point u aint have no personals but u did have sum wordplay and creativity ya verse was kind of stretched but u still managed 2 pull dis 1 off ya verse started off good threw it da verse was kool and it ended cool 2 so u get da win n mah opinion

DoContinue-aight ya verse was plain 2 cuz u aint have no punches dat i realli liked but u did have a personal or 2 ya verse was mad stretched cuz fix dat u aint have no multies n ya verse it started off kool and ended wakk as hell cuz keep it hot da whole way and cum harder next time den u gon get da win everi time

vote- golden shellz

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you get the win in this battle....but, i cant vote...

goddamn 3 pages and only 1 good vote so uppin for more

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this guy won it easily..................................

----------Uppin this battle for more votes----------

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uppin this shit... judging by the votes put on this battle, it seems like you been askin for votes...

cmon lets get them votes popin we returing the votes and stuff and yall cats not votin

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both of you need to advance to the grades and work on sentence structuring cause both of those rap verses are wack you wouldn't get payed if you payed me!

ayyo ayyo lets up this battle here pz

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what is this cat talkin about.. anyways... uppin

...............................................pol l

uppin this battle its still only one vote in here.

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Voted For: Golden shellz

Aii Breakdown

Flow-Aii If ANybody hade good flow in this battle itll have to be Golden shellz I Mean Even His Structure SHOWS good flow so I had to give him My vote for flows

Punchez-Aii This Was A hard Decision Bcuz DoContinue Started off with a really nice bar but then he lacked to keep his verse on track but Golden Jus kept it comin every other bar so thats why he takes punchez

Personalz-DEF Golden Sheelz he dug up some Dirt On Docontinue LOL So Of course he takes personals

Multie-Nobody- i Didnt see any real Multies so this area doesnt go to anyone

Vocab- Again Nobody Didnt Really Focus on Good use of Vocab So Again Another empty category

Originality- You Both Were Very Original But Of course Golden Takes it ...his verse was original bcuz he jus didnt focus on hard punchez he also focus on personals and thats what made it more original made it have less chances to have played bars and stuff do you know what I mean ?

my v/ Golden Shellz

And Oh yeah This is an adiquite Vote Jus Look At The rules LOL

DoContinue You Owe My Money/ vote

Golden Shells Can You RTF PLease