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08-09-05, 05:34 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: taz
v/taz STRUCTURE:both had bad structure not feelin either had good flow....so i got niether on this one!both up on structure make each line end at the same point. Personals:TAz, had better personals in his verse....Natural killa ur verse was iight but didnt get as much personals as taz in there PUnches:Taz had better punches in his verse, had great opener and great closer and punches were really solid, natural when u through a punch make sure it lands man......up on ur punches VOcab-Not much vocab at all....so i cant really say much, both up on vocab to enhance ya verses yo. Originality:Both really original fresh disses and shit....both had good verses but not great..... Multis:Natural killa obviuosly had the better multis in this to make his verse ok......didnt help him get the win....taz make sure u have more than 2 lines wit multis next time dont make it look like u dont care..........V/TAZ |
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08-09-05, 05:43 PM
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#32
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
thanks man much apprreciated^^still uppin for votes people
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08-09-05, 09:04 PM
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#33
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: D808 EF89
uuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn nn...
and taz....if ya win this...wat ya say about a 12 line rematch?...I underestimated you here and though you sucked...so i freestyled a verse instead.. |
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08-10-05, 01:51 AM
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#34
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 84D9 88E9
uuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn n
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08-10-05, 02:09 AM
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#35
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
haha.....same thing happened to phreenapdizzle and i took him 5-0 lol.......ill think about the rematch iight.......but ill most likely be down fa sho........UPPIN FOR VOTES YA'LL
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08-10-05, 03:53 AM
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#36
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IP: 2029 97B3
Voted For: Natural killa
so doesnt Taz already lose because he went over the line limit? anyway Taz - first thing i noticed was horrible structure. i couldnt really find the flow cause it was hard to read. you didnt have any real punches or personals. i was disappointed in this verse. no personals no nothing. i would give you a 4/10 Natural killa - much better verse than taz. u had a good personal. well it wasnt that good. but compared to taz's verse it was great. u had a punch in every bar. overall yo basically won with the first bar. i would give you a 7/10 |
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08-10-05, 03:00 PM
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#37
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin!!!..........let the votes role in yo.........
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08-10-05, 03:55 PM
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#38
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New to RV
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IP: F9A3 F671
Voted For: taz
Vote Taz.. u got some good flow and rhymes in.. your structure looks solid especially for writing it so fast.. only thing i didnt like is how ur used same words twice a couple times.. like rhymes.. murder.. and rap.. but overall the flow was better than killas.. killas verse lost me and it looked like he found a rhyming word and wrote anything about it.. vote taz
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