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04-21-05, 01:08 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Big City
Big City: chea,...yo you just a manly bitch, this Dyke here wanna run you like ya sig dog, cuz u LIGHT YEarS from a BUZZ ^^dope fucking bar best one i've seen in FL in weeks 10/10 rappin aint for you, go ahead and switch jobs hoe stay down, this lame clown, couldnt get PROPs at an improv show ^^decent bar 6/10 heard that he dyin to pull chicks, im resupplyin the full clips he like a rodeo clown, im amazed the way he ridin this BULL SHIT ^^good meta nice punch 7/10 the attacks is vicious,... homie u lack prodigious God couldnt save that flow, .....nigga its sacreligious ^^ok 5/10 look jack, im pleadin.....this might b past ya reason but u rappin, you got an Affinity for committing acts of treason ^^decent 5/10 Overall: 33/50 (66%) Affinity: Ur grammar is weak no wonder ur shit at talkin English If u got an issue then wait for god to deal with ur wish ^^no 2/10 ur girl called told me she aint even miss u, drop to ya knee Bag, kiss my shoe, hit the floor, no need to force, u asked me ^^no 1/10 NOK=wack, feel my intensity as I Nok out the smallest Baron I don’t bother to offer aid & attention, to anyone not Carin ^^wow 0/10 Call urself the biggest city, u aint massive, I aint foolin me My punches “Knocked u out” leavin u at the hospital for surgery ^^no 2/10 The wrong decsion was NOK, you shoulda went vice versa Go ahead think ur flawless as I order meat just as raw… ^^didnt even rhyme 0/10 Overall: 5/50 (10%) Vote: Big City
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04-25-05, 11:56 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 47A6 5A95
Voted For: Big City
Big City chea,...yo you just a manly bitch, this Dyke here wanna run you like ya sig dog, cuz u LIGHT YEarS from a BUZZ ^hehe, nice opener rappin aint for you, go ahead and switch jobs hoe stay down, this lame clown, couldnt get PROPs at an improv show ^good bar, funny heard that he dyin to pull chicks, im resupplyin the full clips he like a rodeo clown, im amazed the way he ridin this BULL SHIT ^lmao @ second line the attacks is vicious,... homie u lack prodigious God couldnt save that flow, .....nigga its sacreligious ^okay okay look jack, im pleadin.....this might b past ya reason but u rappin, you got an Affinity for committing acts of treason........1..... ^good closer Good battle right here, vocab was on point and I was definitely feeling your flow, some multis here and there which improved the flow. Punches were nice, creative and you had some dope personals in there as well. Structure was good to, nice verse man, enjoyed reading it! Affinity Ur grammar is weak no wonder ur shit at talkin English If u got an issue then wait for god to deal with ur wish ^okay opener ur girl called told me she aint even miss u, drop to ya knee Bag, kiss my shoe, hit the floor, no need to force, u asked me ^no real punch NOK=wack, feel my intensity as I Nok out the smallest Baron I don’t bother to offer aid & attention, to anyone not Carin ^good bar Call urself the biggest city, u aint massive, I aint foolin me My punches “Knocked u out” leavin u at the hospital for surgery ^nice nice The wrong decsion was NOK, you shoulda went vice versa Go ahead think ur flawless as I order meat just as raw… ^decent closer Overall okay verse but I felt you could've come a lot harder with the punches and personals if you worded them differently. Had your vocab on lock as well as your flow and structure. Just feel like you had nice creativity but nothing was really bold or hardhitting, no hate...
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