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Old 12-15-04, 11:26 PM   #46
Parallel
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Wicked Clown:
sry man but you lost this...you had a good stucture and flow but you dont really have any good punches that are worthey of winning this you need to work on playing with words like flow intelligent did...its the only way of saying shit this guy has dope punches...but you did have a good stucture flow and vocabulary and some metas but ive seen better from you..but keep it up dont give up...weerd..No Hate

Flow Intelligent:
nice verse even know i know you didnt need to try witch you didnt but you still took this with nice witty metaphores mixed into punches...i liked your verse alot actually...came real dope...with some good vocabulary as well...i seemed to see you coem better close to the end...but you had some weird stucture and flow to your verse...never seen that from you before hmm o well...you win

VOTE: Flow Intelligent

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