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11-26-04, 12:53 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
lol.. this wasnt newbie... this was a quick battle... watch when i put some force into my punches...in later battles...
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11-26-04, 07:53 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin............................................. ............
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11-26-04, 10:27 AM
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'Member Those Golden Days
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IP: 0CE9 54B1
Voted For: FrankieFive
eh battle punches- MR harder hittin personals- F5 more of em, and harder hittin multis- Neither metas- F5 for havin em wordplay- F5 for havin it i guess humor- F5, i smiled structure- MR overall better lookin flow- MR just went together better F5 aight verse. U need to work on personals, punches, and use some better word play. Liked the punchlines, but the structure is kinda off. MR not your best work. punches were aight, one personal, no word play, no multis. gotta put more thought into ya verse. No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/FrankieFive pz |
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11-26-04, 11:55 AM
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IP: A614 E9B5
Voted For: FrankieFive
gotta go wit f-five....his punches came harder then mistic-rouges...but u gotta structure ur verse better may'n...overall it was nice...u also had a few multis in there return tha favor please http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161728 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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11-26-04, 01:38 PM
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IP: 8246 A167
Voted For: FrankieFive
i think that Frnakie took this hands down....just a better overall verse except for his structure...ya fam work on your structure and harder hitting punches and you could elevate.... Mistic your wack just start over and go reaad some tutorials or something...cmon now how are you gonna rhyme "this" with "this"....work on everything.... v/frankie Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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