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12-23-04, 03:54 AM
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Voted For: Ike
Ike Aiight Now THis Was A Good Verse, Better Then Your Other Ones, First Off Multi's Was Sick, I Like The WordPlay, Punches Was There And It Was Hitting Hard, Metas, Ha Ha Nice Mang Playing Of His Name....Structure Was All Around Decent... Vocabulary Could Use A Little Work But Good Shit Mang Terror Wow, Mang This Was A Weak Verse, Sorry To Say No Punches, Attempting WordPlay I See>>?? Any Way Multis Need To Be Aded Here, Personals Are So Played, Get Some New Vocabulary You Use The same Shit Over And Over Again, The Whole Structure Was Stupid Don Seperate The Bars We're Not Illiterate....I Seen You Do Better Mang.....
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