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Old 08-13-05, 01:12 AM   #16
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uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!
mo votes dis shit is getting good
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Old 08-13-05, 03:16 AM   #17
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This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle

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Openings, closings: SP. wins for being harder. Phrees closing is wak, but i kinda like his second line to the opener.
Flow: Phree def wins. SP, your sentences are too long
Hits/Personals: Phree wins by a hair. SP, the part about the milk carton and getting chopped was awesome, but then again, you'd keep a chopped body in your kitchen?? LOL. and Phree had a great line with the bird in a nest needing assistance.

Its pretty even, but Phree would get my overall vote for this reason: SP, you killed your shit with flow. Flow is like a girl's face. Its the first thing you look at, and if it sucks, then there's no need to get interested, b/c a bad face ruins the whole girl. Bad flow ruins the whole verse. Sorry, i'm not much better.
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Old 08-13-05, 07:09 AM   #18
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Welcome to my battle stage, ya name is S.P?/
Im phree, im in rattled raged so quick! inter-est me/
nah..

You come to reverse my verse and hurts no doubt/
not that it works, but the fact that you straight jerk-in out/
nah..

if you really were the best, you should be resistant /
u like a bird in a nest, who needs assistance/
ok...

for instance.. i noticed u bawl out to get votes/
u probly travel the distance and crawl around to take notes!/
nah...

i mean u just need to keep working on ya punches and all...


ayo nigga from chi-town where niggas like you would get shot and laided down*
i'll bury u in da ground cause dats we chicagoians get down cause will put u so deep u wont be found*
streched...

u dont punch or cut cause dat ma style but i will put .9 pound slug in ya ass and have u say ow*
now u wine'n like a lil bitch cuz ya ass got hit then ya pass out and ya and wakes and look around*
nah..

guess where ya ass at bitch........... ya in motha fuck'n clouds*
now dead and u on da milk carton miss'n and ya family ya is now bitch'n they cant find u chopped in ma kitcken*
nah..

now dat ya life has ended cause god aint give u a second chance cause life has ben suspended*
ok..

only reason i pick u is cuz u had 2 vars that was OK...
both need alot of work...
 
Old 08-13-05, 10:41 AM   #19
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Uppin i K.Oed him
i thank everyone fo da votes

and PhreeNapdizzle
nice drop
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Old 08-13-05, 06:25 PM   #20
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Peace Back
Openings, closings: SP. wins for being harder. Phrees closing is wak, but i kinda like his second line to the opener.
Flow: Phree def wins. SP, your sentences are too long
Hits/Personals: Phree wins by a hair. SP, the part about the milk carton and getting chopped was awesome, but then again, you'd keep a chopped body in your kitchen?? LOL. and Phree had a great line with the bird in a nest needing assistance.

Its pretty even, but Phree would get my overall vote for this reason: SP, you killed your shit with flow. Flow is like a girl's face. Its the first thing you look at, and if it sucks, then there's no need to get interested, b/c a bad face ruins the whole girl. Bad flow ruins the whole verse. Sorry, i'm not much better.


aint dat a vote by the way..............
because he replyed to da thread
and voted but i will pm strobe about it
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Old 08-13-05, 09:43 PM   #21
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yo phree kicked ass in this battle...flow was great along with vocab and originality...my vote=phreenapdizzle
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Old 08-13-05, 11:57 PM   #22
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how i close dis
i K.O'ed him so do i
get a win!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 08-15-05, 11:31 AM   #23
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uppin fo 2 mo votes
strobe said i didnt put
3-K.O
so i'm still uppin
2 mo votes
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Old 08-15-05, 12:10 PM   #24
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Voted For: PhreeNapdizzle

wow both of yall are trash, but i vote phree cuz i liked his flow better, no quotables.
yall need to elevate the lyrics ALOT.

ez

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Old 08-16-05, 12:17 AM   #25
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uppin battle
give 2 more votes please
will return favor
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Old 08-16-05, 12:39 PM   #26
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uppin fo votes.................
give some please
1
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Old 08-16-05, 11:19 PM   #27
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uppin fo votes.................
give some please
1
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Old 08-17-05, 02:31 AM   #28
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uppin fo votes.................
give some please
1
need 2 mo votes
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Old 08-17-05, 04:13 AM   #29
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checking polls...........................................ga t gat.....no simily
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Old 08-17-05, 04:14 AM   #30
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ooooooh shit get dat removed................................
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