uppin fo 2 mo votes..................
little help...........

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uppin fo 2 mo votes help me close dis shit
uppin 2 mo votes

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man. to be brutally honest, i didn't get what i expected from either of u. SP had more punches, i never really could catch the flow. some of phree's suff didn't make much since to me either. since your punches were about eual in strength, i'm a give this one to SP (since he had more)
SP: i liked your emotion (it felt like u were pissed when u wrote it), but u either need to flow better or change the way u type.
Phree: couple of your punches were weak (ex. 2nd one),
but i could catch your flow A LOT better than i could catch SP's. it was close. if Phree had better punches i would've went with him.

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dat would be five votes
but dats feedbac so
uppin fo dat last Vote

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uppin fo some!!!!!!!!!!!!
votes one mo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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uppin uppin fo fo mo mo votes votes
give me one mo vote

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Vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote
damn give me one mo vote

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give some damn votes damn
1 vote damn stupid MFer

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.............................................uppin

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i'm getting real tired of dis

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