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Old 07-31-04, 11:35 PM   #16
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Voted For: Paramik

Paramik

I’ll “huff and puff” on this guy…. until he’s left with a broken home.
I’ll block his weak and soft lines, like a blockage from kidney stones.
->>first line was ok i guess second didnt really connect at all

You love to dick ride random people like you were a stipper whore.
I bet that you couldn't connect with the mic, if you were the cord.
->>i liked your second line but your first needed a lot of work


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This bitch thinks that hes a rapper, hes prolly never even sung
You know its vitol when his biggest idol, is William Hung
->>its been done before but second line was decent

The bells rung, and now its time for me to ruin your plans
Cause you throw punches as hard as a boxer wit broken hands
->>weak

Pretty weak battle but paramik took it by a little bit.
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Old 08-01-04, 12:01 AM   #17
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Paramik gets this one with an overall harder punch and better wordplay this was a nice lil drop from the both of you but Paramik jus came with more consistency in the 2 punche lines and i felt they hit alot harder

my vote=Paramik
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Old 08-01-04, 11:43 AM   #18
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Voted For: Paramik

aight i enjoy reading these short battles...

both of your first two lines were whack but both had nice lil finishers..it was close but this is my opinion.

spek..
The bells rung, and now its time for me to ruin your plans
Cause you throw punches as hard as a boxer wit broken hands
thought it was koo 7/10
para..
You love to dick ride random people like you were a stipper whore.
I bet that you couldn't connect with the mic, if you were the cord.
that was tight.8/10
 
Old 08-01-04, 11:52 AM   #19
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This was a good battle hot spits form both sides

WIlliam hung lines are GAY, cant stand them at all

The kidney stone line did it for me

VOte P

hot battle
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