chea thank u for votin mandela & marvelis.........uppin for more votes......2-2

uppin.........................my structure in dis one is.............SMH...........vote up

Voted For: PreZidict

im battlin this bitch for the hell of it, im gunna swat this prick
he doesnt even got respect for himself
.................................he named himself "PREZ-A-DICK!"
Don't use same word twice....
ill give it to you straight, homie you just flat out suck
his chances of lossin is like a thunder storms hitten..
...then hes gunna get struck!
terrible wording....
your bein ripped, you and your rhymes are as soft as silk
niggaz family has to eat cereal wit forks...
........just to conserve milk!
Ha....
just like ya sig, when he sees me he "always be movin"
cuz even if a vet was workin on ya....
............."ya still couldnt be improvin"
No........
he cant catch up wit my lyrics, nah son your "too slow"
the only win in his record is when he paid the guy to "no show"
Eh...played....
relatin to stats nigga, you always gonna be "below"
cuz son you couldnt find luck...
....even if you found a pot of gold on a rainbow
Weak closer..

thorn a killa?? please, been here "longer" than me & still "fallin off" like glueless weave
u got "gerber" lines.........even when "babies" read ya shit dey dont give u "feed"*
Nice opener..
u should be ashamed of ya raps, son jus "hide yaself" like "disgraceful bats"
any1 who reads ya writtens jus laugh, cuz dis "puss not focused" like "distracted cats"
Strained but still good...
"disease a crotch"..........u create da "illness" inside "nook"**
funny, u gettin more "zeros put in ya frame" than a name "portrait of murda mOOk
Eh....
PreZ got him shook, u "nervous" let go ya "pen" before u "scare da book!"
u baked nigga but far from cooked, my lyrics indicate a vet...urs signal a rook!
Lead-in was weak, but nice punch...
"mammal rings"..............u gon get "married 2 animals"
y u put "meat" on da screen?? my verse "ate" urs like a digital "cannibal!"
Nah.......
nigga u slay me, i prey-thee...keep ya "ass seated" like ya "crack is lazy"
move packs..fiends pay me, while dis "rabbit's generic disease" consists of "rabies"***
Eh.....ok closer...


Generic's shit was just that, generic, played and overall weak...Prez had better punchlines and complexity..

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Voted For: PreZidict

voted for prez...........

disease under estimated prez and didnt come fuul force...


punches...both
personals....disease
metas.........prez
wordplay...prez
structure........both was weak
overall.....prez

prez had a couple lines that just capped his verse off more than disease...both verses were ight nothin special......but in the end disease was missin one hard ass punch to take the win...but he didnt come wit it..prez good shit boi

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Voted For: PreZidict

DiSeAsE verse:

im battlin this bitch for the hell of it, im gunna swat this prick
he doesnt even got respect for himself
.................................he named himself "PREZ-A-DICK!"
Not the best opener that I think you couldve came with. That personal was weak, and not hard hitting at all.

ill give it to you straight, homie you just flat out suck
his chances of lossin is like a thunder storms hitten..
...then hes gunna get struck!
Structure messed this line up, which I felt couldve been worded wayy better

your bein ripped, you and your rhymes are as soft as silk
niggaz family has to eat cereal wit forks...
........just to conserve milk!
When I first read this line, I was like, 'wtf', but then it dawned on me 3 seconds later when I began to read the last line, this was dope. Your best so far

just like ya sig, when he sees me he "always be movin"
cuz even if a vet was workin on ya....
............."ya still couldnt be improvin"
I could sense you heating up. This wasnt all that, but it was better than the others, and you showin a lil consistency now

he cant catch up wit my lyrics, nah son your "too slow"
the only win in his record is when he paid the guy to "no show"
Worded kinda off I think, but this was descent. Nothing spectacular, but it hit pretty hard,

relatin to stats nigga, you always gonna be "below"
cuz son you couldnt find luck...
....even if you found a pot of gold on a rainbow
Structured wayy off, and not a good opener

I think you need tow work on your structure, your opener and closer and coming a lil bit more consistent in your battles. Not too many hard hitting punches in this one, but that's the least of your problems, because I can see that you got some skillz.


PreZidict verse:

thorn a killa?? please, been here "longer" than me & still "fallin off" like glueless weave
u got "gerber" lines.........even when "babies" read ya shit dey dont give u "feed"*
Not the best opener here, and this was a long ass punch to read. Nothin big here, just there

u should be ashamed of ya raps, son jus "hide yaself" like "disgraceful bats"
any1 who reads ya writtens jus laugh, cuz dis "puss not focused" like "distracted cats"
Not too hard of a punch, but it was still there

"disease a crotch"..........u create da "illness" inside "nook"**
funny, u gettin more "zeros put in ya frame" than a name "portrait of murda mOOk
Couldve been better

PreZ got him shook, u "nervous" let go ya "pen" before u "scare da book!"
u baked nigga but far from cooked, my lyrics indicate a vet...urs signal a rook!
Pretty descent punch here!

"mammal rings"..............u gon get "married 2 animals"
y u put "meat" on da screen?? my verse "ate" urs like a digital "cannibal!"
stretched, but descent

nigga u slay me, i prey-thee...keep ya "ass seated" like ya "crack is lazy"
move packs..fiends pay me, while dis "rabbit's generic disease" consists of "rabies"***
Nice closer. I was waiting for that personal to come in, it was a lil too predictable though.

This was a nice verse. I would say work on ur structure, but I seen better structure outta you. Some hard hitting punches, well, not that hard, but harder than you oponent which will always give you the win. I just think you should work on some harder personals next time. But this was a good battle

Overall, I guess I'ma hafto give my verse to prezidict, because I felt he came a lil bit stronger in this one, and had the least amount of errors. Both of ya'll started off kinda slow, but then picked it up near the end, but that wont always be a good choice. Prezidict gets my vote, because I was feeling his verse more, and I felt he came a lil bit harder.

RTF...Link in sig against esco ya'll....Thanx. Or murdz, Dont matter which one.

Oh, I forgot to say, both of ya'll got some skillz and potential, and I think that's exactly what my crew Livin' Legendz is looking for, so if ya'll want to be in a active, loyal crew with coo fam, drop by and post some shit in the tryout thread.

~1~, oh and RTF.