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Old 10-03-06, 12:47 AM   #31
Wordz AhGod
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Voted For: Mystic.

B. I was feeling your verse a lot more here bacause your shit was more clear and on topic and point. You had a more clear sense of the topic in this matter so you didn't have to use crazy ass slurs and 'going no where prases' or 'imagry' that clauds most topical battles. Your shit was deep and I was honestly into it for a minute though some of your lines fell off towards the end but ended out str8. 8/10

TheSin...man, you hit me on a pet peeb when it comes to topicals man. your verse was wierd poetry shit with the wierd boring fake shakespear phrases that I mentioned above. Your lines lacked truth, flow, and depth and was replaced by vocab and weird go no where phrases that claude topical battles up with shit that makes it so niggas wont want to read or vote in. Its not your fault that I dont like that style man, gauranteed some one else might vote different but, I see R.B. getting this by also staying more on topic as to where you vierd off a lot and talked about some whole other shit with only about 3 or 4 lines talking about the actual topic.

V/R.Bjork

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