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Old 08-09-04, 11:59 PM   #16
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sorry for this post, link didn't show up for some reason on last post...this is just a punchline battle could you guys please drop an honest vote on it....

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140992
 
Old 08-10-04, 12:18 AM   #17
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Voted For: Triple_N

Vote-Triple N
u had punches dat really did damage to shabba...u lacked in personals but u booth great......Shabba u wuz missing personals n ur punches were weak

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Old 08-10-04, 12:20 AM   #18
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^^^^hate.
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Old 08-10-04, 12:21 AM   #19
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D-Blue..that is a hate vote man, i saw the cheating thread
 
Old 08-10-04, 12:26 AM   #20
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Voted For: Shabba Ranks

open- Triple N
close- Shabba Ranks
personals- Shabba Ranks
metas- Triple N
punches- Triple N
multis- Shabba Ranks

win- Triple N

I liked his verse better especially the pepto bismol line. his verse was more interesting to me. no love lost for the 2 of you tho

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Old 08-10-04, 12:28 AM   #21
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okay dont pay attention to that post above me. especially who they think i voted for, my vote is for triple n. triple n has my vote!
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Old 08-10-04, 12:32 AM   #22
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Voted For: Triple_N

Ya garbage and whats worse is u didn't write dat
So u can't fight back, cuz you also bite wack
^DECENT OPENER
Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time
To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes
^OK COULD'VE BEEN WRITTEN CLEANER
You'll be here all alone still doing ya shitty spittin'
Foreva losin' cuz our obituaries will still be betta written
^DECENT PUNCH
Ya rhymes rightful place is in bedpans and bathroom stalls
Shabba Ranks new theme song is Hey!! peptobismol
^NICE..FUNNY PUNCH
Your a fakin' jamaican that can be taken anyday
Only way u jamaican is if ya 1st name's ray and last is gay(reggae)
^OK PERSONAL
So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed
Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text
^^OK..CLOSER NOTHIN SPECIAL

Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me...
Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy...
^NICE FLOW..OK PUNCH
This kids soft, ill give him a punch to his gut and puncture his insides...
And i wouldnt be his friend online...cuz he Literally Dickrides*...
^DECENT PUNCH
You not on my level, so you better proceed with caution...
I run through kids like you, and raise the bar like polevaulting...
^WAS'NT FEELING THIS..POOR RHYME
This dudes a bitch, Ill hand him a loss, then ill hand em some clips...
And when he got cum on his lips, is the only time he talkin slick...
^^OK CLOSER..COULD'VE BEEN BETTER

overall im gonna go with triple n on this his punches connected better but some lines you played in both verses it would've been better if both had dropped the same amount of bars.........decent battle but it seemed like both came fairly weak.........
return the vote....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054
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Old 08-10-04, 09:27 AM   #23
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Voted For: Shabba Ranks

this battle was okay, i guess..

structure - tie
wordplay - toss up
punches - shabba
personals - shabba
overall - shabba


to me, shabba barley took this..

triple N, you verse was coo, your opener was alright but you started to drift off from there and go down hill.. your wordpla could of been better and none of your punches hit.. the one about ray gay was ok i guess, i just wasn't feeling it..

Shabba ranks you won basically coz of better lines. you both had the same stucture and rhymes so it came down to punchlines and i think that you got the better of him in that..
so I vote for Shabba Ranks..

Keep it gangsta and return the favor in my thread with an honest drop will you? thanx, heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352
 
Old 08-10-04, 12:55 PM   #24
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Uppin for some honest non hate^^ votes on this battle
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Old 08-10-04, 02:56 PM   #25
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...............^^^ill get to them links............
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Old 08-10-04, 03:05 PM   #26
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shabba Ranks
...............^^^ill get to them links............

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Old 08-10-04, 03:26 PM   #27
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Voted For: Triple_N

^ur best lines were (Triple N) were:
Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time
To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes
^ lmfao, altogether u had a nice structure and good flow plus every bar rhymed perfectly.. and u took the closer with:
So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed
Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text
^really nice way to end the battle, good job!

Shabba Ranks- ur verse was good with punches, especially the opener:
Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me...
Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy...
^nice punch to start off, you have nice multis throughout but some of your lines were stretched when u tried to make them rhyme.. and sumtimes they were stretched without rhymin'..

so with that feedback i give the win to: Triple N keepin' it consistent throughout, nice quick battle y'all.. peep my links aight, ~wun~
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