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White Powder has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 11:43 PM.

MetaPhysik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 11:44 PM.

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Huh china.

Good Luck Meta...This will be my last battle..

Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”

^^ = Sig PASTOR TROY

AND WITH THAT IM R-E-T-I-R-E-D after this battle closes :-)

Aight check it

..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White Powder..
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..




Dwight/White/Right.
I made a thread so everyone can get Phase One password and tryout.

Voted For: MetaPhysik

metaphysik:

good structure....sick flow.......your punches were hittin very hard..this was a decent verse ffrom you i was feelin this alot.......1st line....was alright pretty decent 7/10..second line...it was alright..good wordplay.. 8/10 ...3rd line.....lol jokes..this was a good line 8/10.. 4th line..lol good closer..n best line..haha cuz its tru.. nice 8.5/10

powder: your structure was bad...ur flow was bad....punches were ok..1st line was alright..nothing special 6/10 ....2nd line....it was aiight 7/10 ...3rd line is PLAYED..heard that way too many tiomes 4/10....4th line..it was alright nothing too good 7/10

overa;; meta gets my vote

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Voted For: White Powder

White go this with harder punches.They were much harder than Meta.Nice wordplay.

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Thanks to both of you for the imput n shyt.. hit me up wit links if u want me to vote... uppin

Uppin.

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Huh china.

Voted For: MetaPhysik

quite close.......

best bar
Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
^^this woz my fav.its personal,a nice punch,gud meta and wordplay.

worst bar
Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”
^^gud flow n wordplay.but toilet jokes and milk puns are hella played......

overall.

..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White Powder..
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..

overal my vote goes to meta.....i dnt thnk either bar was as hard as whites first,but both were beta than the played toilet line.
for this reason.i say meta jus edges this.

return an honest vote please!!!!

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Voted For: White Powder

hmm...

white powder:
IP:


Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
^first line.. pretty good..second line, i think you flipped it well.. even tho that punch is a lil played..
Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”
^lol..... i liked that.. nice word play..

..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White Powder..
^first line was a bad setup..second line was decent..
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..
^confusing.. respected then hes a no name imposter..i guess it was decent..

i gotta give it to powder for the wordplay.. mets id give urs a 7/10.. Powder is like a 7.4/10

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Voted For: MetaPhysik

Metaphisik's lines hit a little.. his wordplay was also better and i especially liked the White Powder play off.. good job from both but i go with meta

can you return favor with a lok at my thread, thanx, one..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

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