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08-23-04, 11:21 PM | #1 | |||
Home Of Philly
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NewKid vs ImWhiteUrDead
IP: 7DC8 13A6
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-26-04 at 11:21 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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08-23-04, 11:23 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 11:23 PM.
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08-23-04, 11:28 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 2FC4 BDBE
ImWhiteUrDead has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-04 11:28 PM.
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08-24-04, 01:05 AM | #4 | |||
Home Of Philly
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IP: 7DC8 13A6
u jus a old man who need 2 stick wit flicks..(pornos)
u couldnt b freestlyeking if u lived wit flip.. i got shells that bust hell n leave u bleedin from ya knees 2 lips.. next time dont make a sn on a rap site.. cus most of theeze niggaz smoke ya flow like a crack pipe.. u shuld of stuck 2 doin tricks on half pipes.. chek ya location only u beat iz ya meat.. grab tha vasoline n tha towel and sit on tha toilet seat.. u culdnt b known if u was god's kid.. i drop tha stillmatic n ya grill like Nas did.. i cut ya body up in put it on a stick like a shishkabob..(meat on a stick)..then mail ya brains n a box 2 ya misses job.. i pull out tha machetee and rip ya face off.. u like 2 balls with a bat so jus stick 2 baseball.. |
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08-24-04, 01:13 AM | #5 | |||
Home Of Philly
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who won this battle
IP: 7DC8 13A6
uppin sum votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ com on yall...how do u get a K.O on here if some on dont show or sumthin else like that
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08-24-04, 08:52 PM | #6 | |||||
New to RB
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IP: F62D F8AC
Ok, whos' the "NewKid" runnin around and holdin his dick
Talkin shit like no one can touch him, it makes me sick You thought i was a bitch and herb who couldn't even rap Well guess what Kid, i came back with a bitch slap This bitch talkin about a 5-0 like he gonna KO me You couldn't KO me even if he was Obie facin Mobie Think of he ruff times, i could "ruff ride" over you harder than Ruffridah I'm comin right behind ya and you think you a tuff rhyma I'm a tell you this, bitch and remember only this time around After i've done beat you you'll be thinkin who's the bitch now |
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08-24-04, 09:15 PM | #7 | |||||||
Detrimental Thoughts
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IP: F62D F8AC
Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead
ok Whitey takes it cuz he had harder punches.....better wordplay and structure...just a baetter verse overall NewKid....decent punches....notharder than Whiteys.....your structure was a little off and your wordplay.....ehhhhh.....ok......elevate.....both of you can v/ImWhiteUrDead Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-25-04, 01:07 AM | #8 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: BDE8 1790
Voted For: NewKid
yo i give my vote to da new kid because his punchlines. his punchilines took this battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-25-04, 02:03 AM | #9 | ||||
FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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IP: DE1C 607B
Voted For: NewKid
new kid took this by a lil bit...he edged you with better punches and personals...a couple multies, and had good flow...structure was a lil off but good...imwhiteuredead...u need to elevate more...add more creativity...ure opener was weak, and your closer was just getting stronger...so vote goes to newkid...was just over all better
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08-25-04, 07:12 AM | #10 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 2096 BC81
Voted For: NewKid
Punches = NewKid Vocab = New Kid Multies = Non Existant Metas = Maybe ImWhiteUrDead Yo I'm SORRY But You IMWHITEURDEAD That Line About Mobie An Obie...It Reminded Me Of Eminem 'Without Me' ..Ya Know? ...''MOBY!....YOU CAN GET STOMPED BY OBIE!''...An I Hate That Song So........ .............NEWKID Got My VOTE....Sorry IMWHITEURDEAD, Good Lookin Tho, You Still Got Dope Rhymes
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08-25-04, 09:47 AM | #11 | |||||
"Ill Emcee"
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead
I think IM white has this..... his punches came harder and i liked his flow better.... new kid not bad.... but i didntr really like your structure.... Nice battle Jayme... Brad~~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-25-04, 09:53 AM | #12 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: BF45 37DB
Voted For: NewKid
new kid took this easy better punches metas were good too needs to work on flow and structure to make it easier to read white.. ur verse was not potent enough, weak personals and punches, good flow and structure weak metas too simple. win to newkid...... no hate just honesty BUT if u want to white we can battle next if u can handle it pm me or matterfact ill set the thread u can accept or decline |
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08-25-04, 01:07 PM | #13 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 1E2E 3649
Voted For: NewKid
Vote for NewKid.. Nice flow , good punches , some wordplay Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-26-04, 03:22 PM | #14 | ||||
GG Haterz
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This was feedback posted for ImWhiteUrDead
IP: CD8E 018F
close battle, but New wins. white you were good but New Kid wuz betyer. i liked the punches, flow, and personals wit new, structure wuz white. white your rhymes were kinda simple. "u culdnt b known if u was god's kid..
i drop tha stillmatic n ya grill like Nas did.." haha new. white one line i liked wuz "I'm a tell you this, bitch and remember only this time around After i've done beat you you'll be thinkin who's the bitch now" really wuznt funny, but decent closer. peace
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08-26-04, 03:47 PM | #15 | |||||||
Ask About Me
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IP: 0594 6E13
Voted For: ImWhiteUrDead
you killed him that others guys rhymes just got real boring it put me to sleep ...your was short asnd sweet...lol but it was kinda even until your ending that last bar made the diff ......goddd ending nice personal just elevate a lil more....
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