Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-17-04 at 02:54 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. asking for votes in the Lounge

Mr.Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 02:25 PM.

Yo,this herb flips more verses then burgers in Burger king~
This 'Battle' is outta ya reach like the a hobbit in LOTrings*~

Ill reduce ya to a translucent ghost so u wont be recognized~
Ya words & verbs couldnt be on time even if they were syncronized~

Drowning niggas in my third world "Natural" Flow's~
Executin' more wiggas then Alabama seen death rows~

This cat aint a thug but he defintley is a outlaw~
Hes a hardcore gay always usin his "Lockjaw"-Clashin wit me was ya biggest flaw~

THUGLIFEOUTLAW has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 02:40 PM.

OK..I aint bitchin but u must have bitten tht verse coz look at all ya other battles style structure wordplay is all wack in ya other battles so why is ur verse like this now i think its a bigg transformation ...look at this peeps can u honestly see someone typin this and then this verse
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=133676

OK..I aint bitchin but u must have bitten tht verse coz look at all ya other battles style structure wordplay is all wack in ya other battles so why is ur verse like this now i think its a bigg transformation ...look at this peeps can u honestly see someone typin the verse in the link and then this verse
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=133676

bcz I've elevated a lot, thats why i'm never on this site as mcuh as I used to be, i'm out trying to get better, and I think i've gotten better if ya ask me, and I've learned a lot about structure, personals and shit

yes but from ur old battles to tht come on.....u must have done summin

Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW

lol thuglife you merked this kid...your verse was decent..shulda worded sum shit different..but ur flow and structure was good and on point...ur punches were decent no personals..good wordplay

mr.freezer: bad i wasnt feelin ru structure or flow u gotta lotta improvement to do....ur punches were weak......ur personals...u had none..vocab...none..wordplay..none

can u return the favour and drop an honest vote on this battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155760

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Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW

Thug - good spit man, you had some good wordplay and your flow was on.

Best Line - Line 10, and I can already see you beggingin to fall, I can sense it in the air,
Your worthless, far as you gotten to a 'close battle' is actually 'being there'

Worst Line - Consider this cat an easy riddle, the way i have no problems figuring him out,
You wouldn't 'own me' if i was somehow your girl and i had my pussy in ya mouth,

Mr. Freeze - iight spit, you had a good flow.. but your punche need some work.

Best Line - Yo,this herb flips more verses then burgers in Burger king~
This 'Battle' is outta ya reach like the a hobbit in LOTrings*~

Worst Line - Drowning niggas in my third world "Natural" Flow's~
Executin' more wiggas then Alabama seen death rows~

OVERALL - good battle, thug took it.. his flow was better and his punches were hitten harder. Mr. your punches were ok, you just need to come harder VS harder people.. think of more thoughtout punches n wordplay.

Vote - thug

RETURN THE FAV
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154622

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Uppin this battle for some good explaing votes....