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Check in by: 11-06-04 at 12:20 AM

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Lyric_RevelatioN has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 11:30 PM.

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 11:51 PM.

ok here it go

yo you new to this site so you cant be too hard
the only time u pop slugs is walkin through wet grass in the dark

read the 'lyrics', this 'revelation' im killin
stomp on his head and leave more prints than a north carolina fitted

i know you think that u sik, but this nigga is spiteful
your 'lyrics' cant be too dope ur second name comes from the bible

he dont really wanna battle, he gay he jus wanna sex talk
im gettin votes when they see punches hittin the screen like fight night on xbox

man this aint no revelation, my lyrics u cant handle
break his arms and limbs, leave him with four casts(forecasts) like the weather
channel

im sabotagin ur career of Michael Jackson like gay naughty games
this kids flows all over the place like kids who aint been potty trained

ok u know u going to lose so jus sit there and pout
u wanna hit pussy? sure, knock urself out



i hope thats enough

where u at?..........................................

after throwin this shit down i know youll want more///
ill pull an eminem and give you a fuckin encore///
ill leave u down bloodied beaten and battered///
from hearin my punches ur prolli sittin there sayin oh my reputation is shattered///
this is my first battle here and you mite be able to tell///
it doesnt matter tho realli cuz ill still rip him well///
you belong at the bottom my shit is first-rate///
your girl tell u she pulled a paris hilton and me and her...we made a sex-tape///
so skip all your bullshit throw down some shit that is hot///
so you dont gotta be embarrassed by a kid on his first drop///

shit you prolli killed me i couldnt think i was runnin outta time....hot shit nice verse

Voted For: sabotage

i gotta go wit sabotage......both had good punches...but thats the only thing that revelation had......sab had better wordplay(liked the[dope,bible]and the[fourcast,forecast]), and better flow....revelation shouldve came alot harder....i can tell that he'll be good ...just keep elevating kid.....my vote goes to sabotage

Voted For: sabotage

aight... this was an....ok at best battle... nothing spectacular... have seen better from sabatoge but he still gets the win and here is why...

sabatoge-good flow, ok punches and personals, decent wordplay, lacking a little in creativity...michael jackson lines are kinda played but still funny any way... structure was way off, overall imma give your verse 6/10

Lyric- flow was aight, weak punches and personals, structure was wack (the use of /// to indicate the end of a line is very newbish) creativity was aight... neither of ya had a multi... over all lyric no hate but ya gotta elevate a lil. 4/10

overall this battle was kinda wack... looks rushed... not a fan of rushed battles... but any way the winner is sabatoge with a better all around battle verse.... no hate to either MC cause ya both came out and all that so props to both of yall for that... keep elevatin and stay up both of you....~1~

VOTE- SABATOGE

Voted For: sabotage

yo you new to this site so you cant be too hard
the only time u pop slugs is walkin through wet grass in the dark
^^^^na, weak intro. dont like it
read the 'lyrics', this 'revelation' im killin
stomp on his head and leave more prints than a north carolina fitted
^^^^dont get it, and flow was really WACK
im sabotagin ur career of Michael Jackson like gay naughty games
this kids flows all over the place like kids who aint been potty trained
^^^^ideas were there, but it needed better execution!
ok u know u going to lose so jus sit there and pout
u wanna hit pussy? sure, knock urself out
^^^^LOL now that was a better line, good closer
after throwin this shit down i know youll want more///
ill pull an eminem and give you a fuckin encore///
^^^^mmm, average intro, good wordplay
ill leave u down bloodied beaten and battered///
from hearin my punches ur prolli sittin there sayin oh my reputation is shattered///
^^^^FLOW WAS WACK, na weak punch
you belong at the bottom my shit is first-rate///
your girl tell u she pulled a paris hilton and me and her...we made a sex-tape///
^^^^haha DRY, very weak punch, no meaning to it
so skip all your bullshit throw down some shit that is hot///
so you dont gotta be embarrassed by a kid on his first drop///
^^^^mmmm, pretty weak closer, you need to work on your flow and you punches are really quit dry, no hate

vote goes to sabotage. punches were a bit wack, but that last one, HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA ONG ROFLMAO!!!
veryy good!

return the favour ok!

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'Till Death

yeah yeah uppin for more...........................

Voted For: sabotage

ay nice with the *im sabotagin ur career of Michael Jackson like gay naughty games
this kids flows all over the place like kids who aint been potty trained* nice one

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