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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
04-10-05, 11:38 AM
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the real man of steel
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Young Blaze vs Acuity
IP: 58E6 C588
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10-14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-10-05 at 12:08 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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04-10-05, 11:46 AM
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#2
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IP: 30A5 0C4C
Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 11:46 AM.
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04-10-05, 11:59 AM
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IP: 58E6 C588
Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 11:59 AM.
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04-10-05, 12:11 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 30A5 0C4C
You rhymes are mild, we read-em and ask more questions than surveys
Your a molested child, you've been used more than a common phrase I see ur 10-0, damn perfect..after ma punches connect that'll be wrecked And I'll be a murder suspect, as Young is blazed* and is heart arrests "Killin Emcees"**, your pussy fool, u couldnt "jump" me if u was a giant kangaroo How are we in the same crew?, damn ur bout as ill as the common flu To cure u... I dnt even need a prescription, dis ur doom, i put u in a tomb, like u egyptian Your wack, dats an established notion, I come on stage and cause commotion Your annoying like a rash, u come on stage.... and get hit with a bottle of calamine lotion Your stupidly thick, type 2 throw a dynamite stick, before lighting da wick I cud say ur ass is raw kid.... but then id have ta tell RV bout what ur daddy did *=play on his name **= his profile occupation is killin emcees
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04-10-05, 12:28 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
ight fast one lets do this
Loosing The Gatz to Blast Off Ya Frame….. Booting “G-Unit Members" is The Only Time acuity Is Droppin Game spikes thru ur chest,tear Acuity in a Rage…. Blaze will put a light to ur chest like treasure hunters in Caves.. I send-Shots,the pen-jots,an puts an end-To-pretend-Flocks… i'll have ya fantasizin bout wats next like Acuity lookin at his friends-cock… no fashion statment but i'll wrap yah head while blastin da tech look see i'll leave “Acuity in a bag like students" packing up textbooks… I pop n’ kill jus to demonstrate hits fool… Im sendin punches across ya grill like some chevrolet symbols… This ho fail-more When I flow-hell-pours…. U wouldn't be "Close-to-Suite" if you were Hotel-Doors.. Insertng-These-Tech-Straps to purposely-let-claps…. i jus Gave you a "Run for your Money" like PURCHASING-EX-LAX...
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04-10-05, 10:18 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
upppppiiinnnn..................................... ...
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04-11-05, 10:23 AM
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#7
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Light Weight
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IP: B3B9 F44A
Voted For: Young Blaze
punches=young mettas=young wordplay=young structure=young wack battle but I had 2 vote for someone!!! |
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04-11-05, 10:03 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
upppppinnnnn...................................... ..
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04-11-05, 10:11 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 9458 811B
Voted For: Young Blaze
Acuity - Not A Bad Drop!! Flow and Structure was on point, i know ure lines aint stretched, but drop the super-size writing unless it has meaning. The vocab was alright, cud've been better, a few nice metas in there. ure punches were not all hard-hittin, a few nice personals, i liked how u played off his name....but u had a few played concepts, sick and ill shit lines are too played....overall i think u need to come more original and harder....6/10 Young Blaze - U always drop some nice shit and u did again!! flow was pretty gud, a little choppy in places cuz of stretched lines. ure wordplay was hot yo, the vocab and shit was not basic, some gud complex shit. u had sum nice metas in there, the opener was pretty gud, the gunit shit was funny, the closer was gud, but that x-lax shit is becomin played now.....personals were there, some nice shit, overall i think u were more consistent with the hard punches giving u the battle.....7.5/10 Return the favour on one of my battles in my siggy!!!! Make it a good explained vote, cuz i don't want shit DQ'ed!!!
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04-12-05, 10:55 AM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
upppppiinnnnn..................................... .
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04-12-05, 11:22 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Voted For: Young Blaze
Good battle here, Young just got this in my opinion though YB your shit flowed ok and nice multis and shit, but you could improve your structure. This ho fail-more When I flow-hell-pours…. U wouldn't be "Close-to-Suite" if you were Hotel-Doors.. that bar had me laughin as did a couple of other punches. Nice drop Acuity "Killin Emcees"**, your pussy fool, u couldnt "jump" me if u was a giant kangaroo How are we in the same crew?, damn ur bout as ill as the common flu that was your best in my opinion, you had good personals and flow was ok, but you didnt get this because youngs punches were harder. Nice verse to. NO HATE.
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04-13-05, 03:32 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 90DE 7E67
Voted For: Young Blaze
vote blaze............ ummm yeah. lyrics-blaze wordplay-blaze structure-blaze punches-blaze metas-none enjoyable verse-blaze all the way through kidd you did your thang... ps...start battleing someone worth your record so your battles mean more to you....
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