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There are ways to get around that you cocksuck, just write a verse on word or notepad or something and then check in, copy and paste the verse. Easy to write a verse in an hour and 15 mins, which is the time he gave you.You'd have to be a serious retard to check in straight away without writing anything. And if your so bothered about him prewriting, why did you accept the fuckin battle?

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

wannabe 'n fake ain't harmin-me to ache ...too shooked to be offical
cus really...Only time you're an emcee is if you looked at ur intials...(M.C.)
aight punch opener 7.5/10
got u on the hook,ur artificial...passed unknown..dented 'n sealed
cuz the terf on this battle's uneven as the astrodome's centerfeild
aight 5.5/10
spinnin up 'n down like a wheel...ur rollin of the cliff...'n u don't even know it
ur whole rep torn 'n demoted...got wins cuz the ones u got seated..voted
ok not that hard 5.0/10
none of ur lines get qouted..dickrider...i mean.. JUST ATTENDING THIS is ur goal
& if ur interest's freestylin..then the percentages are unknown..(bank/interest/his prof.)
not understandable... and doesnt rhyme 3.5/10
when this site found out my alias...there were 2 threads in LL on it
but..when they found out your's..everyone rolled on they head 'n just thwarted
kinda disssin urself though..2.5/10
Efl now sucks cuz u got a battle on it....beatin a hoaz?..don't suit me
'n you changed from taz to mystic..but ur still looked at as a joke 'n looney
aight....lol...good closer and straight hard punch...9.0/10
28/60...
aight verse still some punches needed some hard hitting but still aight verse keep it up.....

Ya skill’s wackness is like an illness, but son there ain’t no cures..
I’d lay down ‘the bottom line’ and it’d still be above all of urs..
aight opener 6/10
And ya wanna talk about bitin’ style, dude ur a fuckin’ spaz..
Cuz ur style wud be original……,if ur name was Daz..
aight 5/10
This hoe surrounds me with shit, I can’t find my way back..
I cud be ‘lost between ur accounts’, I’d still ‘find them all wack’..
ohhhhhhh...niiiiceee.... 7.5/10
Dude’s a joke really, he keeps recreating his stupid brand..
Cuz he cheats so much his accounts cud start a boy banned..(band)
damnnnnn...lol....8.5/10
Kid’s a dickrider, but son……why not go ride ur own thang..
Cuz u got enough accounts for a fuckin’ full on gang-bang..
aight...6.5/10
To me, ya combination of skill just don’t even get you near..
Shit, I’d rag on all ure alias’……but I don’t have all year..
aight closer...6.5/10
40/60
ok u had a betta verse some lines there were hillarious good job....

my/ v/ goes to M.C. jus cuz he had a betta verse cuz of those funny lines...NK u did good but still wasnt quite as welll....so...my v/ goes to MC......

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my opinion is that this is a close battle, but M.C took it for more consistency with the personal punches, nice shit!!! and hella elevation, lol

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

mystic chaos:

1.Ya skill’s wackness is like an illness, but son there ain’t no cures..
I’d lay down ‘the bottom line’ and it’d still be above all of urs..

^Like tha punch....No wordplay tho'...multi's(none)...But still hit...7.5/10

2.And ya wanna talk about bitin’ style, dude ur a fuckin’ spaz..
Cuz ur style wud be original……,if ur name was Daz..

^A lil personal punch..Lol. at Taking Daz style...But it couldve been better still....6/10

3.This hoe surrounds me with shit, I can’t find my way back..
I cud be ‘lost between ur accounts’, I’d still ‘find them all wack’..

^Another personal.....like this 1...Cuz N.K. does have plenty of alias names....7/10

4.Dude’s a joke really, he keeps recreating his stupid brand..
Cuz he cheats so much his accounts cud start a boy banned..(band)

^Nice play on words...I like tha Boy Bann'd part...Your best punch thus far to me..8/10

5.Kid’s a dickrider, but son……why not go ride ur own thang..
Cuz u got enough accounts for a fuckin’ full on gang-bang..

^Not really effective tah me,Maybe juss a lil...3/10

6.To me, ya combination of skill just don’t even get you near..
Shit, I’d rag on all ure alias’……but I don’t have all year..

^A personal?....It couldve been executed better..It was aiight...4.5/10

overall:6.5/10...Couldve had more multi's an better wordplay here an there....but still a coo..drop.

Natural Killa's breakdown:

1.wannabe 'n fake ain't harmin-me to ache ...too shooked to be offical
cus really...Only time you're an emcee is if you looked at ur intials...(M.C.)

^Nice play on tha name,used multi's an good structure...just tha begining is a lil off...juss a lil...8.5/10

2.got u on the hook,ur artificial...passed unknown..dented 'n sealed
cuz the terf on this battle's uneven as the astrodome's centerfeild

^this was a lil weird..didnt make sense...I get what ur tryin ta say,but failed at the play on words...2.5/10

3.spinnin up 'n down like a wheel...ur rollin of the cliff...'n u don't even know it
ur whole rep torn 'n demoted...got wins cuz the ones u got seated..voted

^Dont know if its true,but nice multi's..an good structure..well ta me atleast...6/10(cuz theres no proof)

4.none of ur lines get qouted..dickrider...i mean.. JUST ATTENDING THIS is ur goal
& if ur interest's freestylin..then the percentages are unknown..(bank/interest/his prof.)

^I dunno bout this 1....but I'll give it to you,cuz it flowed nicely...5.5/10

5.when this site found out my alias...there were 2 threads in LL on it
but..when they found out your's..everyone rolled on they head 'n just thwarted

^I need proof on this 1..Im sorry N.K.,but you lose this line...2/10

6.Efl now sucks cuz u got a battle on it....beatin a hoaz?..don't suit me
'n you changed from taz to mystic..but ur still looked at as a joke 'n looney

^I get tha alias name thing now from tha last line...I give you extra points ta make up from tha last line I dropped em on...8/10

Overall:6/10...I think you had good multi's but Failed on sum lines cuz they didnt make sense..well atleast not tah me...But you couldve got this if that 2nd line was throwin a lil better..


I give this ta Mystic Chaos...Why?
Cuz...
He came with alot of personal's..an nice punches..Tha Boy banned line did it for you....

Hey N.K. if you diss-agree...Then P.M. with tha explain'd parts that need'd ta be...An I will get my own vote DQ'd..promise..But untill then...Mystic got this..

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

wannabe 'n fake ain't harmin-me to ache ...too shooked to be offical
cus really...Only time you're an emcee is if you looked at ur intials...(M.C.)
god personal but its played thats liek the most used personal with his name not a bad opener
got u on the hook,ur artificial...passed unknown..dented 'n sealed
cuz the terf on this battle's uneven as the astrodome's centerfeild
ok line played conecept gppd multis
spinnin up 'n down like a wheel...ur rollin of the cliff...'n u don't even know it
ur whole rep torn 'n demoted...got wins cuz the ones u got seated..voted
i didint liek this line
none of ur lines get qouted..dickrider...i mean.. JUST ATTENDING THIS is ur goal
& if ur interest's freestylin..then the percentages are unknown..(bank/interest/his prof.)
im guessing this is in his profile??
when this site found out my alias...there were 2 threads in LL on it
but..when they found out your's..everyone rolled on they head 'n just thwarted
not a very good line in my opinion
Efl now sucks cuz u got a battle on it....beatin a hoaz?..don't suit me
'n you changed from taz to mystic..but ur still looked at as a joke 'n looney
1st ine wack 2nd good personal meta i liked it props best line ive seen in a minute

Overall decent verse you had a few creative spots 2 good personals the rest all bombed however ur taz line was the best line out of both verses props i think u shold work on ovcab and better personals but overall god verse and we cant see his check in time lol :/

Ya skill’s wackness is like an illness, but son there ain’t no cures..
I’d lay down ‘the bottom line’ and it’d still be above all of urs..
liked the 2nd line first one was played filler
And ya wanna talk about bitin’ style, dude ur a fuckin’ spaz..
Cuz ur style wud be original……,if ur name was Daz..
ok line kinda played but ok
This hoe surrounds me with shit, I can’t find my way back..
I cud be ‘lost between ur accounts’, I’d still ‘find them all wack’..
good line liked the personal
Dude’s a joke really, he keeps recreating his stupid brand..
Cuz he cheats so much his accounts cud start a boy banned..(band)
creative line was funny and god personal 2nd best line of battle lol
Kid’s a dickrider, but son……why not go ride ur own thang..
Cuz u got enough accounts for a fuckin’ full on gang-bang..
personal but ur using the same personal over and over and over again
To me, ya combination of skill just don’t even get you near..
Shit, I’d rag on all ure alias’……but I don’t have all year..
lol funny
verall i luved ur boy band line and getting lost in all of his accounts i liked ur personals better they made me laugh but u really need to get more creative

overall im going with mystic i felt his verse as a whole was bettter than urs killa but id\f it was a punchline with both of ur best lines ud ko him but its not props to both of you

RTF ON ANYONE IN CS WORK

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