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Old 05-07-09, 09:38 AM   #1
NoCkTerNuL
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NoCkTerNuL vs Da Problem Child

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No Recycling
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you know the rules... no cheating...
good luck...

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 05-08-09 at 03:38 PM

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Old 05-07-09, 10:56 AM   #2
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Old 05-07-09, 03:05 PM   #3
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let me hurry up and drop this verse before my teacher says something...lol

im in school,itz 4th period, your getting riped in class
this bitch is trash, beating me is like tryin to break bricks with glass
so skip fast, ill stretch his name, phisically leaving him in high-scares
cause ill NOK him out and TURN AL his dreams into nighmares
its all clear, the only reason he hasnt been cliped and crackled
is cuz he's always on someones sack like a defensive takle "lol"
I stole your belt, with flows that melt and unload you wealth
he's still a virgin, but never struggles on getting a hold on himself
(get it)
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Old 05-07-09, 04:21 PM   #4
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Old 05-07-09, 04:28 PM   #5
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"eatin nigga's alive", that's what you said...
a cannibal? naw homie you just good at giving head
like a prostitute that's something you can relate
desperately PMing for battle just so you can get raped!!(1)
i'm back in action attacking whack flows, YOU'RE MINE!!
Hampton Gangsta??? HA! your whole city committed 3 crimes!
I keep it hot, droppin verses to top yours that are mild...
After this you won't be a problem no more, just a child!!

1 He PMed me to battle...
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Old 05-07-09, 04:30 PM   #6
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wooo! i haven't battled in soo long... it feels good. good verse man...
alright let's get some votes!!
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Old 05-08-09, 01:40 AM   #7
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dang this site is D-E-A-D!! votes anyone? feedback? anything?
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Old 05-08-09, 02:33 AM   #8
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Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

da problem child - i guess you had some okay lines. but a lot of it didnt even make sense. it sounds like you put words in there just so it rhymed with your punch....really...what is getting "cliped and crackled" or "high scares"? that doesnt even make sense. if it doesnt fit, then just dont do it.

nockternul - mehh...not bad but not the greatest. you actually got a personal in there. that line about the hampton gangsta reminded me of the line Jada used in his diss against 50 cent.


i vote nockternul..he didnt try to force anything that didnt make sense like other dude.
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Old 05-08-09, 08:28 AM   #9
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thanx 4 da vote..........anywayz uppin...............
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Old 05-08-09, 08:32 AM   #10
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and 4 one hampton,VA is not the subburbs.......you have it mistaken with "the hamptons"
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Old 05-10-09, 04:17 AM   #11
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i thought the hamptons was in new york or something, not virginia... anyways, can someone please vote so we can close this battle already...
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Old 05-10-09, 11:38 AM   #12
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Voted For: NoCkTerNuL

i'm back in action attacking whack flows, YOU'RE MINE!!
Hampton Gangsta??? HA! your whole city committed 3 crimes!
I keep it hot, droppin verses to top yours that are mild...
After this you won't be a problem no more, just a child!!

the best punches in your verse,you needed to just add more personals!then it would have been better.started of not so good,but got better as it got near the end!

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I stole your belt, with flows that melt and unload you wealth
he's still a virgin, but never struggles on getting a hold on himself

the best line in the whole battle but that was the only good one in your whole verse!some of it was forced like the play on his name.some of the punches could have been made harder to!

v/Nok
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Old 05-12-09, 05:26 AM   #13
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thanks for voting jin, uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppin! please vote...
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Old 05-12-09, 06:21 PM   #14
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yo we need votes so we can close this battle already!!! VOTE UP!!!
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Old 05-12-09, 09:01 PM   #15
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

clearly won come guys why you using hate votes

"so skip fast, ill stretch his name, phisically leaving him in high-scares
cause ill NOK him out and TURN AL his dreams into nighmares"
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