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Old 12-19-03, 11:50 AM   #8
RahWerk.
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Tha illest alive:

(Listening) - Beat is coo, old school type of beat.. Hmm..Your flow is very dope, i like it..But, it seemed like u stalled a few times, and couldn't find ur next line... I can understand you fine. Stayed on beat, few times fell off..Your presence if fine..Breath control is coo..The ending is coo, added more emotion...This was nice..Overall a good track, ended nicley, lyrics were nice..Maybe, you lacked in delivery, and in, emotion..But, nice..

7.3/10.

verbal conflict:

(listening) Hmm.. You mumble words.. Flow seems to be on point.. Yeah, quality is a bit whack, wasn't feeling ur track that much.. Beat was coo, on some wu tang shit.. Wasn't feeling ur lyrics much.. Dlivery needs work.. Emotion was allright..

eh, it was ok, a lil below average. 5.8/10.

Vote: Illest.