Sorry about the situation, i cant imagine what your family is going
through. Best wishes.

About the track, the first thing i notice is your voice overs are off,
and i feel if your voice overs are not perfect, dont use them at all.
Lyricaly, it was pretty solid, real. Flow was alright i guess, and the
mic presense was on point. Overall the track was pretty good,
but sounded fairly amature. (Prolly because of the voice overs tho)
Return the favor homie.

Cise