Real good work, Sun.

I'm quite impressed at your message, vocab, and complexity.

What really sucked dick was your format and flow.

Fix that up, use real lines and bars to create your flow.

It'll help.

I really have nothing else to say about this except, good job.

And, I look forward to reading what else you got.

This is 10 times better than most of the bullshit, "I'm a banger holdin my 9" type rhymes kids seem to want us to buy.

Blah to that.

Kudos to this, 7.75/10

Peace

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