Real nice, Cam...

I didn't get near the same interpretation as you did from that...

But not everyone is suppossed to see things the same.

Nice piece, only slightly simple with your vocab.
Good structure and flow.
Great imagery.
Meaning was kinda blah, but only cuz I disagree.

I don't see it as his conscience in the pic...
I see it as "God" taking notice that you are shortcutting through life.
Perhaps judging.

Maybe there's a slight similarity.

But I didn't see death anywhere.

Just a Big Brother type of thing.

7.50/10

Peace...

And peep Asylum if you get the chance!

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