This was a real good wordplay verse...

I liked what I saw.

But aside from the wordplay...

This was a self-prop, mostly blah verse.

Sorry to say that, but after you've read 8000 verses about how bad ass someone is or how much weed or drink they intake...

It gets old.

But, you used some nice wordplay that made this not suck so bad...

5/10

Peace

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