MOC-
ok sounds forced like your trying to get in more lyrics. audio quality could be worked on like there is points where your too close to the mic. the mixing needs work. I also hear mic electrical sounds. some kind of interfearance. try to fix that is like nails on a chalk board to my ears. I would give this track 5 out of 10

13th disapline-
quality is pritty good could be masterd. and Id change the eq on your voice, Not sure If I like the way your vocals are eq'd. Flow was good. I would have like to seen pause some to change up the breaks. lyrics are decent but you dont have alot of emtion so its hard to pay attion to them. like I have to put forth effort to know what your saying thou 90% of people on here are like that just somthing to work on. I know i do its half the time. aight so i give this track 7.5 out of 10

Vote = 13th

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