First Of All,
Your Lines Are Very,Very,Very Short Kiddo,Fix That.You Need To Increase Your Vocab A Little Bit,Cause Judging By That Spit,It Looks Like A 3rd Grader Wrote It.Your Punches Need Major Work Like This,
I Can't Belive I'm Battling A Textcee With Nothing But Whack In His Spits,
Deport Quick,I Hate To Bring Up My Personal Life,But i'm About To Beat This Kid Like He Was My Bitch,
As You Can See Punchlines In A Battle Verse Are All About Punch Lines
Hope You UnderStand,
Multis:
Multis Are Multiple Rhymes Within One Line,Example:
You~Are~Whack~ I~Attack~Back
They Are Usually Seperated With Hyphens(-) Or Dashes(~)
Metties
Metties Are Metaphores This Is Saying The Word "Like" In Your Verse,Or Comparing Your Oppenet To Something Else.
Example
Like A Virgin's Clit,MY RAPS ARE TIGHT//
Nobody Can See Your Punches Like Dark-Skinned Gang Members Throwing SIGNS AT NIGHT/
Wordplay & Vocab Was Already Explained Above In This Post.Practice Makes Perfect(Or Atleast Elavates You)
-One