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Old 12-19-03, 09:01 PM   #14
Peety Popeyes
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Nice, I like the differnt verses, and differnt types of styles here. You had a great way of expressing your feelings here and had alot of power to it. Nice job with hook. Every part of your verse was unique, and was differnt in some way, a good kind of differnt. Ahha, but overall, this was a good piece.
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