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Old 12-19-03, 11:27 PM   #7
RahWerk.
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Listening to; Duce:

Beat is sounding ok, don't really like these, slower beats. It aint my type, but it fit the subject very well. Eh..I wasn't felling ur first 10 seconds of rapping, the singing is dope. You need emotion, sounds like no emotion in you..Lyrics are ok, delivery needs improvement..Hmm..once again, the singing is dope, i like it. You rode the beat fairly well..Since its a real slow beat.. Wasn't feeling the verses much..i donno, just wasn't feeling it...it was ok..

Other then the singing, i wasn't feeling anything else..

6.8/10.

Fiori:

Nice intro.. Beat is dope, i like it. Your voice is very layzie, which is good, on tracks like these..You had fair emotion.. Eh, you need better delivery..Kinda simple..Hmmm..I like the hook, it's dope..Love the ending, when u say the hook..Liked it..Lyrics were ok..short.. You had a lil better creativity, even though you didn't have singing..

7.1/10..

Both had same quality..nothing better.

But, fiori took this. Word. Just felt his better.

Improve both.